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"LADY HYPNOTIC IS BACK...!!!"
  by LADY HYPNOTIC


GUESS WHO'S HERE?...ISN'T IT FANTASTIC?!!!....
NAH JUS PLAYIN....I WAS BEING SARCASTIC
BUT FA REAL....
EVERYBODY CLAIMS TO KNO HOW U FEEL
FINISHING YA SENTENCES LIKE "YEA I KNO THA DEAL"
PEOPLE DONT GET IT...THEY JUST DONT UNDERSTAND
AND...
THEIR THINKIN MENTALITIES NEED TO EXPAND
TO ME...NIGGAZ SEEM CHILDISH...OR MAYBE ITZ CUZ IM TOO GROWN
WHO KNOWS? I GUESS THAT ANSWER WILL REMAIN UNKNOWN....
ANYWAY.....
EVERYBODY GOT A TIME IN THEIR LIFE WHEN SHIT BE SCREWED
YALL KNO THE NEXT LINE......"PHYSICALLY AND MENTALLY BRUISED"
DAMN IS THAT THE ONLY SHIT PEOPLE COULD USE?
WHEN TALKIN ABOUT STRUGGLES...THAT LINE ALWAYS COMES UP
DONT BELIEVE IT?...WHEN YOU READIN POEMS....LOOK THAT SHIT UP!!!
BUT UMM....AINT THIS SUPPOSE TO BE ABOUT ME?
IM SORRY...../ I GET DISTRACTED EASILY...
SO....WHAT MORE CAN I SAY?...../I JUST HAD TO GET AWAY
IT WAS LIKE A PAIN IN MY HEART JUS TO FACE ANOTHER DAY
BUT NOW...ITS IIGHT...I THINK IM OKAY
YEA THATS IT....I GOT MY LIFE ON TRACK
AND YEAH GHETTO SOUL...LADY HYPNOTIC IS BACK.....
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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2007 (01:16 PM)
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  Lique
12/03/08 (11:00 PM) 
girl, i like you! your flow is on point and your skills are evident! i appreciate this one b/c it's not easy to make a random poem about nothing at all sound so interestinga nd make me want to read it again...that's whats up!

  me-me
10/07/07 (10:48 PM) 
this was tight mw keep it up

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
07/28/07 (02:03 PM) 
must say this had a good flow to it. really pulled the reader in on points they could relate to. at the same time kept it personal and put your flavor to it. definately a hot flow and hot way to resurface from a struggle. don't know ya but welcome back.

  lilhot
07/01/07 (12:44 AM) 
yeah dats whats up the warrior princess is back lol im glad that you ok though

  D'Angelo
06/29/07 (08:01 PM) 
Lol...Nice write ma good ta see ya back welkum bak welkum bak..Ez!!

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