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"Lake"
  by mz_April


I'm sittin here,
with this lake at my side.
An open expanse,
my feelings I don't have to hide.
I can say anything,
this lake does not judge.
The waters are calm,
not a speck of sludge.
This lake holds power,
people just don't know.
The calm waters could ravage,
and banks could overflow.
But it stays placid,
for there is no aggravation.
And for me that instills,
a tranquil sensation.
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (12:53 AM)
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  MiZZ_Chelle
12/29/08 (03:51 PM) 
i loved this write april its so calming but it seems to have some undertones to it too

  blaque
11/19/08 (10:11 PM) 
very nice write...very peaceful 10

  L-Dogg
11/19/08 (04:03 AM) 
Hey this was a great write im not feeling all up to writing a big comment though u know you good much love sis ♣♠♣♠♣♠♣♠♣♠♣♠♣♠ L-dogg

  Magic101
11/18/08 (10:20 AM) 
wow beautifully expressed. love the flow and vibe in ths piece. wonderful ink! 10 starz

  MAVRICK
11/18/08 (09:38 AM) 
allowing yourself to meditate on the calmness of the water for inner tranquility...nicely done.

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