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"Landing in Ink"
  by iva


A beach called fronto beach
right under the belt pkwy
on some hide and seek vibes
a spanish fly
and a dragon fly
passion
the horseshoe crabs
would never bless their eyes on again
What kind of incense
I think it was lemongrass and herbs
no definitely
it was lemongrass and herbs
scents seeping from secret places
in that instant
memories were formed
see I have written of it
Her lips
a shade of pink
pressed againts his purple
and its colorful
the kiss
the bliss
the ship with the pretty lights
in the distance too
and all though they knew
that high tides would come in
they carried on
until the waters touched their skin
The pen remembers
so do I
different flies sharing wings
landing in ink
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2008 (02:29 PM)
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  11th Wonduh
12/18/08 (07:16 PM) 
in its essence this write oozes romance. the way these words painted this picture simply give me that vibe. true poetry at work

  Hank
11/29/08 (08:09 PM) 
Iva man you truly are like "Lara" said a pure poet. You have a way of articulating words I can only imagine.

  Tail mommy
11/24/08 (05:44 PM) 
beautiful....i can't say nothing but that...it to me spoke about romance

  KEITARO TAJ
11/22/08 (07:58 PM) 
THIS POEM IS VERY COMPELLING......KEEP THAT PEN FLOWWING, I SEE THAT U ARE A VERY POWERFUL POET

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
11/22/08 (07:50 PM) 
Superb and very profound writing fam. This was a phenomenal masterpiece. Well done.........

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