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"Last Call"
  by Addicted2Wrdz


I'm completely out of my mind, floating in the sky
Looking for a person not there, a person that's trying to hide
No I'm not high, I'm just day dreaming in class with a dead look
With my head in my hands, and my eyes glued to my book
I'm wondering if our decision was wise, and if we gave up premature
Like we were babies coming out of a 17 year old, something our two parents can't afford
We were stuck together, like we created an umbilical cord
Now we are separated, like a new born
And I do admit that I miss you
I sleep next to my phone, hoping you would call, so I can say that I miss you
I'm mad, because I feel like another girl has wasted my time again
But sad at the same time, because we stopped, before we could begin
I miss the way you looked at me, when I gave you kisses at night
And the way we made love, I made u explode like dynomite
But what happened, to you calling me up and saying you were thinking about me
What happened to the girl that would drive to my place to eat
even though it was only mickie d's
what happened to the girl that I drove everyday to see
And the girl that introduced me to her close friends and family?
That's the girl I was waiting on, the one that I opened up to
The one I wanted to take out, the one I wanted to show my homies to
All of my hours was not going to be worked, unless you would have met me half way
Instead of asking for too much, and get mad when things don't go your way
I mentioned I'm not waiting forever, and that the train is leaving the station soon
But I guest you took my words for granted, because we're both now as single as the moon
This is my last try, to get you to understand me
After this, you won't hear anymore emotions, coming out of me
I dated this poem, and I'm leaving you with this

The Time Starts Now..

Walking Away - Craig David
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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (01:14 AM)
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  Jus BN Me
12/28/08 (01:07 PM) 
i love this. i could feel all the emotions coming out of this. you put it out there nicely.

  Mz Gutta
12/14/08 (01:23 AM) 
IM FEELIN DIZ!!...DIZ A GEWD POEM!!!

  precious one
12/08/08 (09:21 AM) 
SO EMOTIONAL WELL PUT TOGETHER I LIKE YOUR STYLE THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS TOGETHER IS SPECIAL GOOD JOB.

  Chocolate City
12/03/08 (02:53 AM) 
Okay I'm feeling this one. The way you compared y'all giving up premature to a baby cumin from a 17yr old girl was brilliant.. and u went hard from beggining to end.

  Divine Beauty
12/02/08 (02:47 PM) 
from the beginning to the ending...excellent. and ur flow was sick.

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