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"Last Nerve"
  by SloFade


See…
Me knockin' u is not a problem,
I can easily stop you when u talkin',
To be honest, by now, your problems bore me,
Cause when I speak that truth, you seem to ignore me,

Don't assume, ask questions,
No implications when I speak…
What you're about is simply weak,
You're temporary, unnecessary,
Never sure, insecure,
Always fakin', forever hatin',
Always wishin', never gettin',

The flow of life is indisputable,
But you decide to ride in the back,
And quick to get on yo' knees cause'a what u lack,
Then later get mad when I don't wanna hear it,
Even if I did, you wouldn't really say shit,

Not the ear to listen to you gossip,
Not the time to repeat what you say,
Can we PLEASE change the topic,
U got new material every single day…

Now, I'm not judgmental, dishonest or conceited,
I'm way passed that and I don't really need it,
But if that's who you are, then go ahead and be it,
But should it get on ma' nerve, I'ma step up and speak it,
And if it drives a wedge between us, then patna', so-be-it,
And if you're tryna justify yourself again, just keep it,
Cause I know when you're lying, cause you A-to-Z it,
You give me all the details and the bits and pieces,
Like the color of shit that ain't got no meanin',
When usually your stories seem a little bit speeded,

Too hood to tell you anything but "beat it",
And this fake picture that you painted of you, I no longer see it,
And everything I say to you now, you seem to "Oh please" it,
So I might have to show you I really truly mean it,
Right now, mentally, your name is being deleted,
And if you call ma' phone, I'll pretend I don't see it,
And wether you change, I really can't help,
But people like you end up by they gotdamn self…
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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2007 (05:55 AM)
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  Ms. Hollywood
09/01/07 (11:32 PM) 
whoa how come i never read this? yea you put it down...man its a lot of things i could quote but its too much to list... this was a "real talk" piece.. like sayin man "fuck the bs" i feel you though... keep writing....fuck a writers block...lol

  BORICUA GUERRE...
07/14/07 (02:30 PM) 
BYE THE WAY ITS ANOTHER 10

  BORICUA GUERRE...
07/14/07 (02:29 PM) 
YOU NEED TO BEGIN ASKING AROUND CAUSE WITH FLOW LIKE THAT ID BE RICH

  Angel
07/08/07 (04:23 PM) 
Whoa... who made you mad? You seemed pissed off with this one. I loved it. 10 starz from me. Keep writing...

  BlissKist
07/08/07 (09:27 AM) 
Yes indeed! There are SO many people in my life who need to read this piece. That's called misery loving company. They're "temporary, unnecessary, never sure, insecure, always fakin, forever hatin, always wishin, never gettin'" Well said. 10 stars

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