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"Last Rhyme w/ audio"
  by Mizunderstood


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I only have 13 min 25 sec & 3 whole breaths to spit this rhyme so it reaches you in time

Oh yes, since I have plenty of time, I can articulate, line by line how much you’ve been on my mind. But see baby approaching this topic is like walking in the land of mines. You watch your steps and I’ll watch mine. I don’t stray far bc I am the encaged trapped mime. See you understand me just by hand signals & eye blinks, to you, thru my sweaty palms I speak. My garments have been faded to striped of blacks and white my words have been locked. I am the poetic prisoner bc when I annunciate, my cold flow delivers the breeze of a blizzard winter


I only have 10 more mins 5 more secs & 2 whole breaths to spit this rhyme so that it reaches you in time

Quickly, Quickly I must speed up my rhyme so that each line reaches you in time
Oh my where should I begin, the beauty in how our relationship started or how it drastically came to an end. See when I think of you and me, I think that God made you perfectly, precisely for me & he sculpted me with delicacy, making sure my every outline defined what our love would become in time. We are one whole, so baby it’s hard for me not to want to hold onto memories we’ve made frm our laser tags to our competitive nature in the arcade. We are the beauty in images of love that art made

I only have 7 more mins 3 more secs & one whole breath to finish this rhyme so that it reaches you in time

Maybe I should finish this rhyme with the times you’ve made me cry Nile Rivers, Pacific oceans, & Atlantic Seas && Artic Oceans & Tundra’s melted to a tee or maybe I should tell you ab the times you melted me like ice cream on a summer’s ever or spit spat on concrete or meat on a grill melted to a delicacy or maybe I should tell how high you get me peaks & mtn tops or the highest hop hopped in a game of hopscotch, or at the height of a skydivers fear, floating & gliding in the stratosphere. Oh my, my maybe I should tell you how much I wish you were near& engulf me like a chicken smothered in soup or like a laced tied in a shoe & baby I know I said I’m tired of you. But the truth is baby I’m tied in you

I only have one last min & no more breaths to finish this rhyme before you’ve left

& yes baby, for you I gave my last breaths. I hope by giving you my air you will forever float on my over & innocently swim upon my pond like a dove. I have no more words left to express how much your departure left my heart depressed. & I hope that this rhyme spoken line for line from my heart & mind will define to you, how much I did love & did want & crave & did hurt & did feel emotion & its now evident that now that you’ve left, I have nothing left but this rhyme written line by line that I hope would reach you before you left.
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Date Submitted: Jun 07, 2009 (10:18 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  Gabbie Giftsz
06/08/09 (11:08 PM) 
poetry at its best keep doin ya thing =)

  Cell
06/08/09 (07:38 PM) 
nice flow and ur voice contained so much emotion in it, you truely moved me

  angeleyes1
06/08/09 (05:45 PM) 
very nicely written love the flow keep them words flowing much love always

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