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"Last Words"
  by koolaiid


i have no inspiration no determination
to write poems anymore
lettn go of you has been the hardest obstacle i've ever faced so far
but see you wasn't treating me like the woman i am so i had to leave you and walk out the door
but i miss you so much and i needed you 2 know;

my heart keeps holding on and telling me you'll come back but i highly doubt that
when i talk 2 you, i can feel my heart beating so fast
i have trouble breathing at times
i'm just so sadd, i really wanted us to last
all the poems i've written; you were my inspiration;the reason why i write
i have trouble concentrating because you seem 2 always come 2 mind
right when i wake up in the morning
and right before i go 2 bed at night
i haven't yet let go but i'm really hoping to do so;
no worries tho, keep ya head up;stay in school
no doubt; if you need somebody just hit me up
cuz i'll always have ya back
just stay outta trouble and stay on track
but yea dont worry bout me; i'll b good
yes i've cried but it's normal for a person whose broken hearted
no i dont really blame you cuz it was sumwat my fault too
yes we havent talked since the day we parted
but i guess thats a way for me 2 get over you
or at least a start; i guess it will take time
but yea like i keep sayn "YOU'LL 4EVER B IN MY HEART"

well aye i'm done moving my pen
done writing;these will b my last words;last poem for now
later in life, you'll probably find me writing again
but for now thats' all i have to say
hopefully my life comes bak 2 bright colors cuz i'm so tired of living in a dull gray
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Date Submitted: Aug 31, 2008 (12:33 PM)
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  The.Writer
09/05/08 (04:20 PM) 
ive been here

  Prezz
08/31/08 (11:39 PM) 
Don't worry i feel exactly what you goin through, but poetry is true art, and freedm of expression, it should let out ur inner most feelings on a peace of paper. dont let ur creativity be destroyed because a dude got u down, im in the worst of moods, if u want to feel better write more, write a story or sumthin, just make sure ur creativity dosent get dulled

  Athalia
08/31/08 (01:41 PM) 
i love this poem because it speaks to the spontaneous nature of poetry. It is so personal, and so intimate, that it requires the right moment to come out. I agree with the above comment, that no one can take it away from you, but I really love the feeling of lost inspiration you capture in this poem. You will write again, because inspiration is not fixed, but comes in different forms. good write!

  mscookie2u
08/31/08 (01:02 PM) 
NOBODY CAN TAKE AWAY YOUR TALENT SWEETIE. NOT EVEN THAT BIG HEAD BOY. LOL. LOVE AND BROKEN HEARTS MAKE GOOD INSPIRATION BUT SO DOES OVERCOMING A BROKEN HEART AND GROWTH. THINK ABOUT IT. NICE ONE THOUGH.

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