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"leason for the crap dads ( revamped )"
  by Jez


the male emu will sit and wait until the eggs hatch
he then will bring the chicks up
the male fairy penguin does the same
the male seahorse carries the eggs and then they hatch from inside him

In nature the male has a massive impact on the life of his children
In nature the male will sacrifice his life for the life of his children
In nature the male is proud of what he has had a hand in creating


So where has man gone wrong
there are to many men not wanting to own up to their children
there are to many men not wanting to own up to their responsabilities
there are to many men laying their sead and then leaving the scene

So where has man gone wrong
There are to many men that will not acknowledge their kids
There are to many men that will put down those that are theirs
There are to many men that will look at the woman passing by rather than trying to make the current relationship work
There are to many men that are taking the easy way out


It is time to emulate nature
Guys look after your kids whilst they grow like the Emu
Guys you need to step up and care for our women whilst the pregnant in the way that the penguin does
Guys step up and act like a real man


Be a MAN and take responsability.
Be a MAN and keep it in your pants.

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I know that there are some awesome dads out there but this is a note to those that you read about on here and I hear about on a daily basis.
To those guys that are stepping up. Nice to see some real men out there congrats
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2007 (05:20 AM)
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  Aleks
08/09/07 (09:47 AM) 
Wow!! So true, so many barstads out there!! And soo little nice guys. .

  Star55
07/29/07 (12:06 AM) 
Love the last line. "Be a MAN and keep it in your pants" I only wish that some people would actually DO this... Great work Jez, you're definitely a decent man (one of very very few, I might add) xxx

  RidinOrDyn
07/28/07 (07:06 PM) 
I have to agree with Scriptz on takin dis further...but I loved what I read... n iz nice to hear it from a man's point of view...Iz crazy when a man tellz anotha man to step the fuck up! Isn't crazy how everythin is a choice...we choose to love, hate, take care of children...we can't force em to b men...they gotta make tha choice...

  Scriptixz
07/28/07 (10:06 AM) 
i wish you had taken this further, it felt almost like it was unfinished *smiles softly* i feel you though, there are too many deadbeat dads out there...to many sperm donors!!! i wish something really drastic would happen and wipe them all out because if they can't face the music, step up to the plate after a year? there is NO need for meaningless bodies to keep infesting this world!!! sorry but this is a very touchy subject with me only because my beloved sister is going through this *sighs* i ...
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