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"Leaving..."
  by Jody


I heard heroin was the hardest drug to come off of… I actually think its love.



Lightening illuminating the window pane
It’s raining outside…
Peering through the Venetian blinds and watching
The roads fill with water
Blowing ripples across the roads
Thinking about everything
What’s to come from this weather
Tomorrow more leaves will fall
Slowly into lasting puddles
An abstraction of beauty
Last words
Leaving lasting impressions
Like white shoes stepping in
Taking home its colors, unbeknownst to the owner
How love comes home
And how love leaves
Breaking off in the wind
On rainy days
Of course there will be tears...
Puddling
An abstraction of beauty
How falling in love is beautiful
And leaving is like those nights
Where lightening illuminates the pane
Leaving just thoughts
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (09:52 PM)
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  VANiiT33
10/09/08 (01:44 AM) 
U should chck out my poetry and se wat you like!!!

  VANiiT33
10/09/08 (01:43 AM) 
I Love this poem. the best part is when you compare Love to that storm.... I love this piece

  Care-Bear
10/02/08 (05:50 PM) 
loved the wording of this piece and the vivid image made available for me to see. very very nice....

  WIZ
10/01/08 (03:27 PM) 
OH! YES YOU FOR SURE MADE THIS RITE COME TO LIFE! BEAUTIFLLY SCRIBED!

  LyricallyDelic...
10/01/08 (03:23 PM) 
I heard heroin was the hardest drug to come off of… I actually think its love - I couldn't agree more and your thoughts are beautifully abstract while hitting the mark with perfect precision.

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