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"Lee"
  by Aleks


Listen to the song first, then read


Alone again
It appears
The razor tears
Have now reappeared
A heart broken
For my own doing
Ominous thoughts
Are now brewing
My ears are bleeding
From listening to too much
Marilyn Manson
The bathroom knows
As my blood
Fills the basin
Getting so much
Plesure
It becomes my full time
Leisure
Jump in the bath
Swarming with
Razor blades
The blood gushes out
I get in a dase
The blood
Form into blood clots
Float around in the water
Like dancers doing the
Fox trot
It looks beautifull and
Real Ellegant
I think "do I want to
Die this way, While
Enchanted?"........

...............................................................
This is ode to a good friend of mine, who is in hospitle cause she tried to kill herself.
It was one of the worst days ever when I heard!!Im very glad she didn't get to finish what she started!!I just wanna say If you feeling sad or down, PLEASE AND I REPEAT TALK TO SOMEONE!!
I wouldn't want another human life wasted, life is SOOOOOOOO precious.




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Date Submitted: Sep 01, 2007 (08:44 AM)
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  tanquilla
09/03/07 (10:34 AM) 
wow..i don't know wat 2 say..ur right n i hope your friend gets better...god be with you...much love..god bless..peace

  brokensparrow
09/02/07 (08:00 AM) 
*nods*

  Star55
09/01/07 (11:13 PM) 
That's a sad one. Kinda disturbing as well... I agree, if you're feeling down TALK to someone!!!

  snickers23
09/01/07 (03:30 PM) 
cool it gets a 10

  Azon
09/01/07 (09:15 AM) 
Yo this is very deep and the song is very well fitting for these poem and the whole thang was very nicely written from start to finish I like the whole thang

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