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"Leftovers"
  by Afroditee


the cauldron used to simmer
to satiate your hunger

scintillating sinuous smoke
rising from the cavernous heated underbelly

bursts of aroma-filled,
flava-ful insouciant steam
rising circuitously
from the depths of the bottomless pit

well oiled,
no residual stickiness
at pan's bottom:
cumin,
the final flavorful season
merging with dashes and pinches…
sautéed,
until he gorged on what was
once your passion's food
eating all reminders of your burnt
and wasted energy…

now, cries of satiated satisfaction emerge
when engorged stomachs are
rubbed...,
full and resplendent
with contentment’s nourishment,
lip smacking appreciative sighs
aimed at the
chef extraordinaire.

no leftovers for you.

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 (06:08 PM)
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  alastor
08/29/08 (01:16 AM) 
Truly lucid. Succulent. The nectars & batters of this feast left me stuffed. If the recipe of your art is truly as good as your cooking you have this man's heart. Fingerlickin' good. Delicious ma. Thoroughly devoured. No bone left unturned

  mindbenda
08/05/08 (12:32 PM) 
wow the last line was hot nice touch on this much respect your poetry is very strong easy ten starz from me

  XPERIENCE
08/05/08 (11:51 AM) 
everybody is takin my comments... NO LEFTOVERS!!! i love how u write Fro.. So witty.... "now, cries of satiated satisfaction emerge when engorged stomachs are rubbed..." love your word play.. fav

  SlimCutta
08/05/08 (12:21 AM) 
Ahh such a beautiful extended metaphor...and done OH SO DELICIOUSLY LMAO...but for real..i loved how you did this..you know me..i love food..making a nigga hungry and all with these wonderfully soundin words lol

  LyricallyDelic...
08/01/08 (02:49 PM) 
Delictably Delicious ...this wasn't only terrifically tasty...but fantastically filling as well...

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