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"Less than Poetic"
  by getchamndrite


Less than poetic
The memories sit
Under boulders
Kept hidden
Legs positioned
Hands firmly pressed to the sandstone surface
Muscles contract
Perspiration forms
Drips
Strength drains
Releasing my stance
Tears making the journey down my face
Back sliding down the rough surface
Face in hands
Joining the earth
If only something would break these boulders
Dissolve them
Sweep them away
My past might bloom
My garden might be complete
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2008 (09:29 PM)
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  Jonathan Robin...
01/02/09 (01:55 PM) 
Amazing job....very profound composition. I can only imagine how your thesis was derived.

  Fresh Roughex
11/24/08 (04:58 PM) 
nice

  .Mase Da Rula.
11/24/08 (04:56 PM) 
interesting way you went about puttin this together.. you did it so abstractly....so visual at the same time... this indeed has mastery written all over it.. well done ..keep penning....

  dontnohow
11/22/08 (05:25 PM) 
the past bloomin.. thats what im talkin bout...10+

  LyricallyDamag...
11/20/08 (12:52 PM) 
mhm, a great write from a great poet, exactly what I suspected. memories braced and hidden but once released the tears form.. and stain cheeks. I love this write, thanks for sharing it with us Diva.

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