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"Lessons in Love"
  by "Word$mith"
  - This Poem is a response to the poem 1+1=1? by DaddysGirl


There you go ma ma
Slowly..You are catching on
Correct..All or nothing

Now..Let's revisit
Love's Rule: 1 plus 1 is 1
Your Whole..My Whole... Heart

1/2 more than 0
True..but 1/2 is not a whole
You are missing 1/2

It's ok I know...
Let us continue reading
Love is not numbers

Your Numbers add up
They just don't account for love
Starting to sink in?

When I decrease..Love
States..You Increase out of love
It's called: Hold me down

When You decrease..Love
States..I increase..out of love
In turn..Hold you down

Or did we 4 get?
I know.. when hurt..we do that
Forget the other

Love..Improper..And
Unfair..but also Priceless
Irreplaceable



International Playas Anthem ( I Choose You ) - UGK Ft. Outkast
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Date Submitted: Oct 31, 2008 (05:21 PM)
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  Becca Boo
11/20/08 (10:19 AM) 
I absolutely love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
11/10/08 (09:20 AM) 
wow. you absolutely blew my mind with this one.

  foremanlin
11/05/08 (07:46 AM) 
A different take on Haiku for sure. You are definately on, keep writing.

  DaddysGirl
11/01/08 (06:25 PM) 
All of this "studying" is making me horny, how about you? I say we take a break- close these math/love books and just allow one thing to lead to another. Maybe we can learn a little more about human anatomy- they say, "hands on" is always best...As far as the piece- stanzas are on point (as usual) & you expressed your point clearly (whether or not I agree is another story) but I HEAR you ;-)

  The_Pheenix
10/31/08 (10:01 PM) 
This is on point!!

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