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"Let Go ..."
  by Miss Poetry
  - This Poem is a response to the poem *Let Him Go* by Nilla


As I Read Your Words Of Emotions
It Hit Me That Your Mind Is Still Floating In The Ocean
'Let Go' Was From A Person Who Fled From The Pain
After Having Her Pride And Love Shoved Down The Drain...
Washed Away With Tears In The Rain

To Let Go Is To Complete Self And Be Whole Again
Not Allow Insecurities To Be Forced On By Men.....
Or Rather A MAN; A Boy
Who's Doing Nothing But Leading You On As His Toy..
Completing His Goal By Hypnotizing You Into An Illusion For Only Him To Destroy

If He Loves You So Much As You Go On To Say Then He Would Allow You To Make The Right Choice Rather Than A Regretful Mistake

Im Not One To Judge Nor Steer Wrong. But I've Been Through The Best To The Worst
From Bitter-Sweet Kisses To Deadly Corpse.

So If My Words Dont Agree With You Then Take It As Your Love Is Blind
Never Will My Truth Be Too Kind
I Can Spend Months, Days, Hours Letting My Past Rewind.
But I'd Rather Leave It Be
Enjoy My Present & Plan My Future In Harmony.

P.S
I Was You Once Upon ATime
Not Able To Release, Every Wall I Would Climb..
To Be By His Side, Every Tear I Would Hide

Only The Bruises I Couldn't
The Words I Shouldn't
The Baby I Wouldn't

Stress Became So Heavy I Didnt Have To
3 Months Later
My Unborn's Growth Was Through
Another Chance To Him I Threw
Again, And Again And Again

Til That Night Came When I Found Myself Unable To Breathe In His Strain
So Much Going Through My Brain
To Allow Him To End My Life I Was Insane
My Strength I Had To Regain
Letting Go, The Only Option That Remained
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Date Submitted: Aug 03, 2008 (09:35 PM)
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  Nilla
08/13/08 (05:11 AM) 
this piece was amazing, hun. *claps* so full of beautiful, uplifting wisdom. *smiles*

  karena
08/08/08 (04:58 AM) 
yo this is deep, great write you let all of your emotions flow into this piece.

  mindbenda
08/05/08 (01:53 PM) 
this was a hell of a write forreal this made me think feel what you saying it was so well written you came off on this nice job and an easy ten starz for you

  Mrs. Underwood
08/04/08 (12:31 PM) 
10 starz...you speak nothing but the truth

  RoMarie P
08/04/08 (01:24 AM) 
gurl tha really made me think...

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