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"let it go"
  by B3yond R3d3mption
  - This Poem is a response to the poem GET OVER IT by DOMINICANPOET


you say you hide pain
but you alwayz talk about it
what pain do you hide

laughter?more like yells
ugh...whatever..and bye man
lol get over it..damn

how can u say ur in so much pain
when u choose to stay n continue this game
you continue to stand n the storm n the rain
saying my heart says this..then listen to ya brain

you want everyone to leave u the fuck alone
but yet u sit at the computer...holding the phone
attention craving ass..since the day I met you
tandrum having nigga..im trying to forget you
I tried to be friends...I don't wanna be witchu
u keep saying bye..then go..I won't miss you

just get over urself
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Date Submitted: Sep 22, 2008 (04:01 PM)
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  Sutta Kaine
10/24/08 (01:23 PM) 
lol....i warned u my dude...

  Just Me...
09/22/08 (11:13 PM) 
WHOA that was HARSH. If that's how you've really felt about someone in your life, hey it's real. But if it's just a response to the other poem, that's just coldhearted. Coldhearted but with style, so I can't be totally mad. lol. Keep writing.

  AR-15
09/22/08 (06:25 PM) 
Damn... cold but truthful words.. right here... nice drop

  DOMINICANPOET
09/22/08 (05:36 PM) 
Well straight out ten for just speaking your mind love it ten from me and a fav..

  L.edwards
09/22/08 (04:29 PM) 
damn D

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