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"Let me"
  by Blakfiya
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Goin' For Broke by Tha Scorpion



Now
I know you know what to do
and how to take me to a higher plateau
but curiously,
there’s something I do not know
and that’s…

can you take the heat?

of a lady sitting at your feet
drizzling water over your tired soles,
preparing your body as a savory dish
with your dominance placed on hold?

warm cloth
washing your limbs
and lips kissing the moisture away
a time when your dick is at rest
and inside your tongue must stay

I want to play massage
Working the kinks from your shoulders
My sex leaking on the small of your back
As I fluidly work you over

Reaching behind me
Grabbing the backs of your thighs
Working the muscles
With the strength in my hands
Until, relieved, I hear you sigh

Spread your arms for me
As I lay frontal on your back
My hard nipples propped on your blades
While in your ear I sing sultry serenades

“Let me love you down…
…Even if it takes all night”

I know these arms could crush me
I know those thighs could force me
I know you could flip me over and slip
Inside my heat, but give me this…
Submit
to my gentle ministration
Think
how deep I am inside you
Anticipate
what you wish me to do
and I’ll translate the moans
for you

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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (02:49 PM)
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  DGhost
11/23/08 (10:12 PM) 
Much love shown to any woman who can take the time to show that passionate affection to their lover. Great piece here. Fav'd and 10 star'd.

  BlessedOne
11/21/08 (08:06 PM) 
I enjoyed the response. My pleasure also comes from doing these type of activities. Bringing relaxation and calmness to his world.

  One
11/20/08 (03:26 PM) 
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  Jody
11/20/08 (03:06 PM) 
*sings trading places!* lmao...

  drybaggij
11/20/08 (03:00 PM) 
Jeez. Still here. I'll leave, eventually.

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