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"let me hold that heart"
  by lott5000


let me hold that heart.
ill take it around the block.
i promiss ill drop it around the clock.

its just my luck.
to hold ur heart.
to care for something more than art.

let me hold that heart.
ill bring it to my world.
ill take it for a spin,
while you do the toworle.

its just my world.
i promiss ill never make you want to hurl.
just so me how to be a part of your wold.

just let me hold that heart.
ill put it next to mine.
make people mines go completly bline.

just give it to me.
youll never be displeased.
ill just turn that key,
and lock up our hearts.
safe and sound.
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2008 (03:23 PM)
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  danceluv
10/09/08 (09:28 PM) 
aww very cute... i loved it.. fein for love.. i thought you delivered it very well.. ten*z

  David Wilson
10/09/08 (04:14 PM) 
this is a nice piece... nothing like longing for love... Peace and love David

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