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"Let me hold you down"
  by drmbabyboy


Let me hold you down.
Through the good and the bad and the ugly.
I know sometimes things fall apart, but I refuse to give nothing.
I'll go down just like a sucker cuz I'm sucker for you.
I know exactly what awaits, I only want to be true.
To you ... down.
It's so profound the way your words can hold no sound, and still be running through my mind.
I guess with knowledge wisdom finds.
I still feel down, cuz nowadays I don't see you at all, but I keep praying for the better, there's only one way to fall, and that's... down.
Still so emotional and still caught up I reminisce on all letters that I wrote and lost ...cuz I'm down.
I feel transfixed in the center of this, cuz I'm the only one that understands. How do I quit?... I’m still down...
For whatever you decide to go through, I promise that I won't commit until the day that you do. I’ll stay down.
There’s no other way for me to reside.
I’ll keep on trying till the day that you let me inside cuz I’m down or up or whatever you choose?
I know that men are only sinners were all destined to lose..... and go down.
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Date Submitted: Dec 06, 2006 (10:39 AM)
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  jus angered
03/31/07 (07:45 PM) 
=0( aww this is sad. n sweet. love it papo

  mhoney
03/13/07 (12:23 PM) 
i lovev this one

  Dejailayde
01/23/07 (06:44 PM) 
this is beautiful, i finally liked something on this mutha....

  million dolla ...
01/23/07 (03:05 PM) 
aww this was really cute i need some one thats.....down:)

  Mainey
01/22/07 (02:13 AM) 
I'd be down if this was wrote for me, i love it!! keep the rythem luv it sounds great!

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