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"Let Me Love You"
  by RedLoveSong


Let me love your mind

Share your most intimate thoughts

And I’ll cherish them



Let me love your flesh

Fulfill every desire

That is possible



Let me love your soul

Breathe life into your spirit

You need a rebirth



Lose yourself in love

Like your past doesn’t exist

No future is near



A risk worth taking

Place your heart within my care

Certainty is here



That I’ll love you like

I love this art called music

With intensity



And I’ll love you like

I’ve learned to love my own self

With no conditions



Unrestricted love

Classic, real, and simple love

True, fulfilling love



So let me love you

Negatives and positives

Simply all of you

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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (12:52 PM)
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  l0nnieugene
12/17/08 (11:30 PM) 
...&he, in turn, will love Your Melo Corpus 7 covet Your celestial cerebral consumption.

  Lozzodoodle
12/16/08 (02:51 PM) 
love the first 3 stanzas, goin thru the mind, flesh and soul. another beautiful write :)

  11th Wonduh
12/13/08 (11:28 AM) 
"A risk worth taking Place your heart within my care Certainty is here " this write takes me back to a convo from last night. overall this is a masterful haiku sistuh. cats like myself certainly loves to hears those words

  $Frenchy$
12/10/08 (10:35 PM) 
OMGSH...girl... I couldnt have said this ne better! my goodness... this was an amazing write.. this is exactly how i feel about my other half.... this is great write momma! again ten starz, and added i to my favorites!! Keep doin you girly

  The Mad Poet
12/09/08 (03:43 PM) 
Now that's some unconditional love for you...Nicely done sweetie...Keep flowing I love the bg too...Much love & respect

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