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"Let Me Love You...."
  by Untouched_Soul


Apropos my love

Allow me a moment of your time

A day, a month a lifetime

So that I can love you

As no other has dared

Let me be condemned

To the softness of your skin

So that I can drink in your smell

And be intoxicated by the power of you

They say love is BLIND

Well I never want to see again

If it would mean losing you

You are my all

I knew that from the first day we met

And I never want to let you go

How wonderful it is to wake by your side

And watch the sun as it REFLECTS

On your face

It is as though I am in

The presence of righteousness

Awaiting your blessings

Longing to be received

As long as you will have me

I will abnegate all others

For they pale in comparison

Cunningly I will find ways

To hold your interest

And keep you fascinated by our love

I will serenade you like the

Winds sing to the rain

Beckoning it to fall to the earth

I would rather be ostracized

And stoned

Then to live one second without you

For you I would sacrifice

My soul to the devil

For there is no other meaning to forever

Than your dignified name

I am smitten

And have no regrets

I have found my completion in you

Together we are an excellent combination

One mind

One body

One soul

To lose you would

Be the bane of my life

I would rather lose myself





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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2008 (06:07 PM)
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  Dawn
10/31/08 (08:35 PM) 
Oh my Gosh sis..I love ya poem...I like the fact that the words are real..it's sort of sensual in a good way..you have caputred my mind with your words...not to toot my own horn..but it reminds me of some of my stuff..not that I'm saying..I'm so great..but I love these types of poems..they don't have to rhymn. They just need to make sense to the soul...one love

  Ordained Misfi...
10/27/08 (03:19 PM) 
Sacraficing yourself for another is the ultimate love

  Moey
10/25/08 (07:32 PM) 
that was absolutely beautiful. i mean wow, i loved it.

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
10/25/08 (07:05 PM) 
this kind of love is forever...nice

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