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"Let Me Love You Tonight"
A jdbrown and *F1* Collaboration


  jdbrown:

You're at home a bit early, but I had that planned
Come in and be served by your number one man
I know the assholes have been stressin you at work
But I'm here to put our love for each other to work
Come in, set the briefcase down, sit on the couch
Let me undress you, heels off, stockings down south
Here, take a glass of wine, tell me about your day
Let me rub your feet down, you can have it your way
I feel the stress permeating from the depths of your toenails
Even after a long day, your Bath and Body works puts me in a spell
Walk with me to the tub, your hot bath is waiting on you
Let me take off your skirt and top, the Vickie thong too

  *F1*:

I can't even imagine this
knowing I'm coming home to my man
is a heavenly bliss
you are all that I need right now
kiss me
breathe me
take me all in
somehow

  jdbrown:

Seven candles burning vigorously in the background
Playing softly: Ready for the World - "Let Me Love You Down"
Ease your way in the tub, feel the bubbles break on your body
Soak in it, exhale as the lavender scent invades you, my hottie
Feel my hands as they guide the loofah all over you
Firm, yet gentle, I can sense you're enjoying this too
Your body melts when I plant kisses on the back of your ear
Step out the tub and let me wrap the towel around you my dear
Put on your robe, let me guide you to the kitchen
You've been smelling the food, it has your nose itching
A nice T-bone steak, a baked potato and a glass of iced tea
I'm at your side, ready to feed you bite by bite, on one knee

  *F1*:

Somewhere
up there
there's an Angel guiding this man into my space
I am blessed with your touch
your love
and your heavenly face
dry my tears as you dry my back
clothes my body
as my soul can relax
feed me
hold me
like no other man has ever done...
love me

  jdbrown:

Let's go to the bedroom, your safe haven awaits
It's so wonderful to have a woman like you as a soul mate
It would be so nice to, but i'm not fucking you tonight
instead, I'm going to make love to you right all night
But first, I want to kiss you as I watch your eyes gleam
It may feel like it, but this is definitely not a dream
Let me caress you, feeling the heat of your body on mine
Holding you tightly as my hands flow down your spine
Let me kiss you all over, feel my love all over, scintillating
Drift your thoughts into heaven, simply fascinating
Come home with me, lay your head on my chest
Let my hand take its place under your breast
Feel my kiss on your hairline as your mind wonders deep
Listen to the beat of my heart as it sings you to sleep
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Date Submitted: Sep 19, 2008 (12:43 AM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
12/26/08 (02:11 PM) 
this is a really nice collab you 2...the man waiting for his queen to come home...and she is allowed to relax....no worries...no troubles....just piece of mind in company of her man

  Miss Self Suff...
11/07/08 (11:55 AM) 
This is great! Maybe we can collabo on one soon! good write! 10pts

  RUTHiE
10/14/08 (04:06 PM) 
HOLY SHiT!! wow... can i find me a man like you jdbrown, LOL, i got all hot and bother reading this shit! loved it!!!

  LOVEKENDRA
10/14/08 (03:54 PM) 
This is hot!! Good shit!!

  Tuck
10/14/08 (03:10 PM) 
JD BROWN U ALWAYS COME WITH IT MY DUDE F1 U DID YA THANG TOO...YA'LL SPIT YA SWAG ON THIS ON KEEP UP THE MOTHA FUCKIN WORK YA DIG

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