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"Let's Let Love Lead"
  by J-West


Let's let love lead, let lust lose life
Let's let love linger long lastingly
Don't dare deny doing deeds delivering delight
Don't doubt dear days do disappear drastically
Why waste will with waiting, we will wither with woeful wants
Why wait when we want what we weary without
Anticipating anxiously allowing angers avaunt
Again and again adding anguish all about
Forevermore facing frustration
For forgetting fulfilling faith
Heavy hearts, humiliation,
Hindrance, heeding hate
Temptation tests these tender times, though time tends to torture
Tick tock, testimonies tell truths throughout this tribulation
Let’s let love lead let's let love loiter
Let’s let love lose lusts limitations
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Date Submitted: Jul 10, 2008 (04:07 PM)
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  Luvlee
07/30/08 (02:40 PM) 
"Don't dare deny doing deeds delivering delight" I luv that line there this was a very hott write i luved it it challenged the mine wasnt just elementary rhyme nice work.

  Isis sun
07/30/08 (01:31 PM) 
Wow...I'm speechless...the alliteration used in this piece was absolutely amazing..beautifully written love...just beautiful..em hotep

  African Queen
07/30/08 (01:24 PM) 
loving the flow here yo...nicely done!

  ~MISSTHANG~
07/30/08 (01:07 PM) 
i love it! soooo nice! 10 and fav : )

  Kay Ashley
07/10/08 (10:41 PM) 
This is def kind of hot! =)

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