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"let's talk about it..."
  by santiago's p.o.v


I never speak about the best
when getting shit off my chest....
cause the worst seem to be the

hot topic...

so let's put this soul to rest....
it's like breathing in smog...
when listening to you tear me down...
but i do so intently....hoping that you'll
calm down....

...but, that never works...

so i simply have to pose the question
'' why you doing all this fussing?''
as if i like to hear every word of
this language we call '' cussing''

...just tell me what ails you....

and let it hit the floor of discussion
so we can boogie this topic
as opposed to getting nowhere.....for nothing...

so be calm, let's talk about it...
and keep our stress off '' combustion''
plus, my mind is saying '' caution''
cause we dont need me found in an attic
somewhere.....dusting...

so let me just suggest this....
though...
i know the thought's disgusting...
i need you to digest this ...
cause i know im on to something....

instead of,.....
holding up emotions....why dont we find
a better sign?
i mean you say since your a woman
you been blessed with a better mind...
and we're not to old to make this work...
so let the ''little'' things resign...

now i can't ask you to forget'em
cause i know you never will...
i just dont wont these things to break you...
cause i know i never will....
unless you count the bed of course...
but that's another pill ta' swallow..
ta' keep me from finding out that
my ''big'' ego....is really hallow...

look!!
see how talking like this got
chu' cracking my favorite smile...
i think you might like this...
but i know it'll take a while....
so i'll put up wit' cha' bickering...
i was going to anyway...
caue i love you so much....
and i show you everyday.....

just know my patience is ticking down...
and i dont want to meet that day....
when i feel the need to be astray..
your loves my favorite grotto...
your body? my ultimate getaway....
so dont deprive me of my paradise....
let's talk it out,...you kno' ...share advice..
so i can stop freezing off ya hate-born ice....
and we can live a less-complicated style of life....

....wouldnt that be nice?....

so let's train that inside voice...
and give our minds a less-stressful choice...
and leave our problems?.....just that...
cause friends can turn things
an' awful shade of black....
SO COME INTO THESE ARMS!!!
and yes i had to shout it...
just let me hold tight so
you know there's no need to doubt it...
and we can show the world
that there is no ''need'' fuss and pout it...
cause when we have our problems...

.....we motion to talk about it.....
santiago
thank you....

'' love is no game...but can be played from all angles if you allow it
so take control of your life....and one when you look back...
you'll find that '' LOVE''? follows you.....
so why turn back?''
- Xavier sebastian santiago alucard spears
- lost boi (P.W.A.G)
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Date Submitted: Jul 17, 2009 (04:24 PM)
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  คว...
09/18/09 (11:34 PM) 
this piece is tight....it comes aross like you holding a conversation...your words just flow so effortlessly....nice write

  RHS
09/07/09 (03:33 PM) 
I really like this poem. It made think about a reality of life. There are alot of things people need to talk about. However, sometimes people hide and overlook the things they need to talk about because they may feel their is no use in trying to talk about them. Yet this usually make things worse, because unless a person is honest with you you never truly know who they really are. Great write. You make me proud to consider myself a poet. Because people like you are who inspire me to do what I do...
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  tamiah
07/17/09 (09:22 PM) 
Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful poem. It is so deep, real, kind, and expressful. Wow..... this is like the nicest way to tell somebody stop nagging that I've ever heard. Dang this poem is mad sweet. I hope she listens to you. The rhythm was great too.. Keep up the good work. 10starrzzzz

  SwaGGxLuvBaNdi...
07/17/09 (09:13 PM) 
yo as word is bond fam this is live truth right her i just had this talk with my girl yo....hey mad love keep up the works... swagg

  canthelpit
07/17/09 (07:05 PM) 
this is so wonderful omg im lovin this you know i really needed to read this right now you did well keep up the GREAT work and keep that pen writing .... Perfection 10 starz

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