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"Lets Talk About"
  by mindbenda


I'm tired of music saying nothing I'm doing radio pauses
let's talk about these crooked niggas in our political office
there distortion leading to good mens coffins
soilders dying for oil but yet there family don't see no portion
let's talk about priest and how churches keep the offering
not to help the community but so they can drive porsches
let's talk about how races people still think niggas should be sitting on there porches
society is the boot trying to stomp us out like roaches
racism is a major issue so why no one wants to approach this
let's talk about how we teach our kids one hand the bundle the other a pistol
pull that trigger if anyone disrespect you or dis you
our songs telling kids to try and sell more blow then whistles
damn real hip hop I really miss you
wish you could come back from the dead and shine like crsytals
put the fun back in music that would be a beautiful visual
Imma kick a haiku in the middle of this count the sylables

fuck this fake hip hop

I'm opening eyes real quick

make you visible

I'm tired of every time I turn on the radio I feel miserable
let's talk about how my man DJ Scratch One spins that blaze
he cuts so hard I'm strapping on bandaids
let's talk about how I spit so sick my saliva lands in ya mouth giving you aids
how my flow so tight it's like the first day of braids
when I'm on a track I actually have something to say
I don't spit cause I worry about how many times I'm gonna get played
I spit so my thoughts will linger in your mind for day
hay let's talk about how bush is retarded
in a war that his dumb ass started
never says anything of use unless it's carded
other then that I heard more useful shit when I farted
pardon my manners but when I flow I put my heart in
I'm not heartless I just come the hardest
I refuse to talk about li li li lick like a lolipop or how I love to munch on carpets
I will say to clear my mind I smoke more green then gardens
let's talk about how I will never live in no mans shadow
my plan is to drop more hot shit on this music game then assholes
I mean hip hop not this shit about I have mad hoe
that shits lame on thin strings like arrows
expand your mind man don't be so narrow
hip hop is Alicia keys getting busy on her piano
not some of these hip hop whackos
....................................................let's talk about real shit ya!!!..................................................


MindBenda
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2008 (01:36 PM)
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  ~*!:.Br0wN-Ey3...
11/29/08 (10:30 AM) 
dAMN..yOU gOT tALENT aND mAD sKiLLS..tHiS piECE?? bEAUTiFUL!!..i aM liKE aLMOST sPEECHLESS..i liKED tHE cOCKiNESS aLSO iT mADE tHE wRiTE tHAT mUCH mORE..yO yOU aRE tHE tRUTH..lOL..yOU sTRAiGHT rEAL wiT iT aND i rESPECT tHAT..i fELT tHiS wRiTE, iT liKE yOUR oTHER wRiTE, tOUCHED mE..tHiS iS aNOTHER fAVE..mAYNE, i cANT tELL yA hOW mUCH i lOVE tHiS fUHREALZ..yOU aRE siCK wiT yA wORDS..10 sTARS aND dEF kEEP tHAT iNK fLOWiNG..sTAY bLESSED aND mAD lOVE aND rESPECT..|[ niCOLE r. ]|♥

  Moey
11/03/08 (04:17 PM) 
that was pretty fly. 10 stars no question about that. Ima check out the rest of what you got cuz i was truly feelin this.

  AzIz
09/19/08 (02:07 PM) 
I feel your frustration...I read an article the other day w/ a musician stating that "hip-hop can't be gauged, b/c it's an array of styles & ranges of truths for different ppl"...made me say "hmmm"...but I definitely feel this.

  DOMINICANPOET
09/18/08 (05:10 PM) 
well damn a very serious piece hun i can feel it ten from me keep em coming

  Damami2burs4ev...
09/18/08 (04:05 PM) 
Smoke Greens greener than gardens my ype of guy LOL I agree

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