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"letters to a good man"
  by Blakfiya


Beautiful (Instrumental) - Akon
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July 6th, 2009
I arrived safe.
the plane ride was okay.
there are palm trees.
it is nice.
my girlfriends says hi.
I miss you

July 7th, 2009
they keep playing music!
and this morning
they delivered breakfast in bed
delicious fruits and flakey breads
and the sun is shining
and the water is blue;
damn that! what's the big deal?
i miss you!

July 8th, 2009
i went jet skiing
and, apparently, this band on my wrist
means I can drink all day
what kind of stuff is that?
I'm immune to intoxicants
I miss you

July 9th, 2009
I slept on the beach
the room was too beautiful to bear
*sniff, sniff* I really miss you
p.s. I had to kick Trevor in the nuts

July 10th, 2009
I am so happy I'm coming home
I can't wait to see you
and kiss you
and be with you
and I'll never leave you again
see you soon :)
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Date Submitted: Jul 03, 2009 (05:22 PM)
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  Μz Ρ...
07/07/09 (05:53 AM) 
you went away hun... so lucky am guessing its a carribean island right?? I cant wait for my holiday now.....lol never leave again..haha xxx

  Brian Ardoin
07/07/09 (01:23 AM) 
Aww you left?? lol well have a good time and we miss you too..wish I was there haha

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/06/09 (12:45 PM) 
okay not afraid to admit that this one kinda confused me...lol

  after vision
07/06/09 (11:21 AM) 
funny letter -- but sweet at the same time -- shows growth through love

  MAVRICK
07/04/09 (01:49 AM) 
This was sweetly refreshing...a great journal piece...bu this pic is fantabulous...damn i need a vacation!..haha

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