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"Letting Go....hmmm..."
  by DOMINICANPOET
  - This Poem is a response to the poem letting go..I guess by B.R




****jus something off dome not really a real poem but this had to be said****

Poetry obsessed that i may be
I'm stuck on perfecting my craft and creativity
Don't act all crazy now
When we was together i didn't even do it how
i do it at this very moment
you really expect
because you came out the blue
out of no where i should drop everything i do
Because now your ready to be a man
Listen i love you and always will but i can
not deal with this you know your attention hungry
So i will say this to you Go to the army
If that's what you really want Daish
If you feel that's where you need to be placed
Once again your right Poetry did come before you
Because when no one was there for me
Guess who was...Poetry
When you treated me like shit
I turned to it
When i first feel in love with you
It was because of the beautiful pieces you would con-screw
so fuck all the kid shit you talking you wasn't never happy with me
when i was nice and you had all my attention...i was tooo perfect somethings gotta be
wrong wit me your exact words and when i changed to please you
you took it and smashed it to the ground too
so now you expect me just to change again with the things you done
you know when i used to cry and once you even made fun
Your not the worst guy alive
I would never even lie
and also my feelings they never died
i just got tired of trying
to keep you happy but it didn't
Nothing i could do would do it
So i wish you the best in your life
And your right maybe i should have never been the one to throw moves on you
Because maybe i would have saved myself a lot of hurt due to you
And maybe you would have stayed with ya ex
yea member the one you said you left
Maybe you should call her up
Cause maybe she will give a fuck
Because me...My feelings and emotions are dead
So with every word you ever said
Please take them all back because they were never true
Damn now Bella has to live without you
and that's the only thing i really regret
the fact that "MY" Lil princess
has to suffer from your stupidness
So listen i must go cause this is mi vida
the one i must live without ya
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 (06:24 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/16/08 (07:56 PM)
Author: B.R
Poem Title: the key holder

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  Shane Polo
07/23/08 (01:44 PM) 
dats deep..i feel u in this one. ppl wanna get mad when i confess that my poetry come b4 them. cuz my poetry aint gon turn me down or try and break me. really good write. 10

  cotton candy
07/17/08 (12:25 PM) 
WOW... thisz wasz sad yo... i cud feel all tha pain... thisz wasz gud... shit like thisz hurtsz but one person cant fix everything... there are something yuu juss cant fix... ten starsz mama

  smooch
07/17/08 (09:09 AM) 
damn this was deep damn

  bookum
07/16/08 (11:49 PM) 
damn jenn..that was leaking with emotion...i know you said its not a real poem...but it is special write. Jus keep doing you...10 from me

  REALKISSES
07/16/08 (06:35 PM) 
damn sis u got me lost for words but i know ur strong and can get thru this a def ten

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