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"letting go..I guess"
  by B.R


blackhole

she was the thing..the made me come alive...now I gotta let her go...it won't work..I tried..so tired...of trying to bring back her feelings that died...so I got to let her be the star in someone elses sky..be with some better guy...I even left the thing I loved..GS..the thing I met her by..maybe she shudnt have eva told me I was da one to catch her eye..she picked writing over me...so I guess this is goodbye

I hope ya poetry becomes the best...and u make it to number one..nothing less..I have nothing left to say..execpt...im blessed ot have met...some1 who held me in suspense...with her poems..too bad ur poetry obsessed...now im left upset..but what's new..what's next...the army I guess...no regrets..just no1 left to affect or infect

with my poetry...so lay a dragon to rest


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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 (04:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/16/08 (06:24 PM)
Author: DOMINICANPOET
Poem Title: Letting Go....hmmm...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  KINGLO
07/17/08 (04:32 PM) 
th!s piece was raw you alll ways get n offf

  cotton candy
07/17/08 (12:15 PM) 
thisz wasz deep... i wasz feelin thisz one... it hurtsz when yuu kno yuu gotta let tha perfekt person go... yuu juss gotta keep goin... move on... yuu dont have to but itsz best yu shud... if thisz someone isznt willing to luhv yuu bakk then dont give luhv... yuu'll be okae... i kno that yuu'll git thru thisz hurtful time in yer life... but itsz okae... great write ten starsz...

  smooch
07/17/08 (09:07 AM) 
damn *wiping away the tears* this was really sad and deep damn B.R. it hurts to think ya would leave us

  L.edwards
07/16/08 (06:31 PM) 
wow i guess i missed alot man hit me up when you can so we can talk

  lady innocent
07/16/08 (06:27 PM) 
WOW SO DEEP ITS SO SAD KEEP YOUR HEAD UP BOI DONT GO

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