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"...LIE...."
  by KiNg-Go0B3r




im her used up tampon
bled on then thrown in the trash
im her forgotten child left at the mall
she said she'd be right back
im her little dolly call me missy miss polly
or barbie or one of her bratz
she grew tired of me
lost me in the pantry
can't believe i got her name as a tatt
im an orphan to her love
pushed and shoved
bullied by her affection
tossed and turned but one thing i've learned
that i cant run to her for protection
take a bow round of applause from the crowd
you gave such a good performence
now that im walking the streets
basically crawling on my knees
im just one your vibrators your disowning
last night i cried tears of blood
but no one could hear me scream
i tried over and over and over
but i could not get your beloved smell off of me
damn it im caught up in you spell
and if you can't tell
im needing some heart ache medicine
cause when i see you picture
i suddenly start missing
your touch..it was so pleasent
but...im just a pair of throw away contacts
cause i you took me off of your eyes
used and abused
locked up singing the blues
damn i am so fucking suprised
grab the knife take my life
clean cut open me wide
ccause i...am...just...a....lie....
...and i dont know why.....

REAPERS WORDS:.....ghost.........
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2008 (11:28 PM)
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  unique1luv
09/23/08 (09:22 PM) 
Deep isn't the word 2 describe this write.For this emotional piece, thoughts brought 2 light words that described it like no other.Very much a mentally stimulating write as well as a very clear window 2 the soul's heart

  Mona Lisa
09/22/08 (07:57 PM) 
am feelin this...... i love the way you used metaphors am going to have to make this a fav

  ASympl3Diamond
09/22/08 (12:55 AM) 
"im her used up tampon bled on then thrown in the trash"--awww u sick ass dick tickler lol "im just one your vibrators your disowning"---lmmfaorotmmf no comment on that shit nigga ctfu!!! "im needing some heart ache medicine cause when i see you picture i suddenly start missing your touch..it was so pleasent but...im just a pair of throw away contacts"----who is u tryna get all deep fa???

  Isis sun
09/22/08 (12:11 AM) 
Oh boy...this road is hard to travel and your use of imagery to describe it was amazing....

  Chainz.
09/21/08 (11:43 PM) 
damn..very deep..i liked the word play to describe it..and the emotion was felt..10 stars for real without a doubt

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