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"Lie To Me So I'll Know Your Truth {{Area 25 Title Challenge}}"
  by Athena317


It's ironic
to me
that
you think
you wear a disguise
And that
I can't
see thru those
unnecessary lies
.
But dealin with me
isn't like dealin
with any other chick
I'm much more prolific
.
See
.
I don't
ask any question that
I don't know
the answer to
particularly
when I'm
interrogating you
.
Cause
I've done
my homework long before
the questioning starts
And
your answers tell me
a lot about
what's really in your heart
.
A true playa
like me
never tips her hand
And
that's
what keeps me
always in demand
And one step
ahead of you
in your own damn plan
.
And
if your game
was so damn tight
You could
tell me the truth
AND
make me
still
wanna lay up under you
each and every night
.
And I know...
everybody isn't like me
and
they can't handle
livin in reality
.
But
what you don't
seem to see
Is that
the truth won't
"set you free"
It would
actually
bring you
closer to me
.
.
Finally


Athena317
OneLove
2009

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Date Submitted: Sep 25, 2009 (06:19 PM)
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Date: 09/25/09 (06:21 PM)
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  *Miss Toya*
09/28/09 (07:42 PM) 
"A true playa like me never tips her hand And that's what keeps me always in demand And one step ahead of you in your own damn plan " PREACH!

  MAVRICK
09/27/09 (02:37 PM) 
This write was full of emotional truths, love the way you laid it out plain and simple, and coming to a very sensible conclusion...Challenge nicely done!!!

  Planted Daisie...
09/26/09 (05:05 PM) 
you just have a way of wrapping your emotions in these writes just with a touch of reality...nicely penned

  Terry
09/26/09 (01:41 AM) 
...Being close to you is what it really feels like to be free or being with just makes a cuz feel like all their problems dont exist because they feel secure around you? Either way I thoroughly enjoyed the write Stay blessed poet

  cocoadiva
09/25/09 (09:32 PM) 
great write.. i loved your emotion i this.. such sincere emotion.. great write... loved it from beginning to end

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