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"Lies'"
  by Young Deeq


NOTE: I deleted the old one and made a new one.. aha.. hopefully you guys out dere will like it more then the old version :) Peace.


You wake up.. look out tha window to see some beauty,
But, instead you get gory and violent scene,
Thats what you fucking get when you live in a dirty hood that ain't clean,
Non-Legit and nothing ever seen, many niggahs out there lie and steal,
And thats why I'm on a mission to fucking split them into a a billion, They'll start to scream and squeal, Head skin and blood will start to peal, Yeah, thats what you get when you do lieing neals,
I go hardcore like the fucking navy seals,
Your gonna talk behind my back.. Steal my shit.. Man, your really desprate to make your ribs crack,
I got my shit ready, locked up and packed, I'm fucking kill you lyrically, like I am right now on this short track,
Your a beefin' mother fucker that won't stop killing cows, When it comes to the time of your funeral, you'll be on your knees giving me bows, cuz you don't wanna die and your saying that you still have alot of shit to live for,
Aha... Steal?... Lie?.. Aha. not a chance niggah, get ready cuz I'ma pulla the triggah,
Cuz all of those bullshit from you ain't happenning anymore,
I'm let you die on the floor, and lock the door so nobody can help you,
I'll rape your mom and sisters one by one and kill them after I'm done,
Then chop der heads off and bring it to you so you can see that my words are true,
Aha, Gory and bloody, You'll be asking god for help, but he isn't there,
Cuz hes off smokin blunts and he doesn't give a shit or care,
Because right now, I'm a fucking kill you with a platuimn gun, to make you remember all the miserable causes that you've done.. Aha..
R.I.P Josh & Drake
Gonna be dead when I come back into that ghetto.. aha.
Peace.

(RANNNNDOM HATE FREESTYLE LOL)
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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (04:05 PM)
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  Chainz.
10/18/08 (08:13 AM) 
Damn..You expanded this n made it bigger and killed em with it I liked the flow and ya went hard, I hate them to n when ya get back we going to get em haha 10 stars without a douuuuuubt bruh! haha im bored..

  teressaa
09/16/08 (02:54 PM) 
woah thats deep , real deep.

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