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"L.I.F.E"
  by Young Deeq


L.I.F.E

Living the person who you always wanted to be

In your own ways but in order to get your way you must forget your,

Frustrating & negativity thoughts and turn it into a positive mood knowing that you'll succeed
putting your,

Everything in it and work your way there.

PS- My first time doing a acrostic.. Didn't know if i was good or not, you decide!
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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2008 (02:19 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/02/08 (02:24 AM)
Author: 'x'GhOsT'x'
Poem Title: (LIFE)

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  Chainz.
09/23/08 (04:51 AM) 
Very well expressed loved the words and visual you gave , very powerful .. That's what life is and if it was for all people less killings and crimes would happen and most people would be them selves instead of turn to something else .. 10 stars

  stricklyfromth...
09/02/08 (10:49 AM) 
It was good greatly worded good job sir.

  'x'GhOsT'x'
09/02/08 (02:21 AM) 
Very good for your first one try to explain it a bit better though I really like it and I'm going to do a response so watch out for it :P 10 stars

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