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"Life"
by A.C.H.
I am trapped in a cave of emotions;
my worries and fears stir commotion.
Who am I? What is my identity?
Why did my dear love abandon me?
Betrayal by my “so-called” best friend;
will this cave of emotions ever end?
I try to find a way out but emotions grow deeper;
there is no way around but as I move the cave is steeper.
Though the cave is overwhelming there is no need for me to pout;
in the distance pain awaits but I see a light which means a way out.
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Jul 15, 2008 (11:08 AM)
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POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/25/08 (07:27 PM)
Author:
LAYDIE JAI
Poem Title:
Life Is Like A Book
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COMMENTS (34)
Remy82
08/19/09 (06:27 PM)
Sometimes it only to convey a huge message or emotion and that's what I see in this piece. Nice work
M.B.S.
06/28/09 (08:05 PM)
short and sweet definitely loved this write ~1~
smily
06/23/09 (04:16 PM)
YES YOU CAN FIND A WAY OUT BUT MAKE SURE YOU NO WELL THE NEXT PERSON YOU LET IN. WELL DONE
daidai_dts4l
06/18/09 (03:06 PM)
o yea man. keep moving towards your way out and no doubt that happiness will b waiting for you. keep writing
geel
06/13/09 (12:32 AM)
I enjoyed this one. It's time that you began to publish your own work
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