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"Life"
  by A.C.H.


I am trapped in a cave of emotions;
my worries and fears stir commotion.

Who am I? What is my identity?
Why did my dear love abandon me?

Betrayal by my “so-called” best friend;
will this cave of emotions ever end?

I try to find a way out but emotions grow deeper;
there is no way around but as I move the cave is steeper.

Though the cave is overwhelming there is no need for me to pout;
in the distance pain awaits but I see a light which means a way out.
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2008 (11:08 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/25/08 (07:27 PM)
Author: LAYDIE JAI
Poem Title: Life Is Like A Book

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comment icon  COMMENTS (34)
  Remy82
08/19/09 (06:27 PM) 
Sometimes it only to convey a huge message or emotion and that's what I see in this piece. Nice work

  M.B.S.
06/28/09 (08:05 PM) 
short and sweet definitely loved this write ~1~

  smily
06/23/09 (04:16 PM) 
YES YOU CAN FIND A WAY OUT BUT MAKE SURE YOU NO WELL THE NEXT PERSON YOU LET IN. WELL DONE

  daidai_dts4l
06/18/09 (03:06 PM) 
o yea man. keep moving towards your way out and no doubt that happiness will b waiting for you. keep writing

  geel
06/13/09 (12:32 AM) 
I enjoyed this one. It's time that you began to publish your own work

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