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"life lived"
  by lussa
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DRIED UP DREAMZ. {PT.2} by candylickerlover


What if i told u that i had no hope of tryin to go after my dreams being happy all the tyme is never what it seems, I den cried so much all my tears dun turned into streams, Ive talked prayed and tryed and said so much my words sounds likes screams... Got me askin my self what are you doin what is ur point in life I got it so good god gave me a chance twice he said just because you've been put down so many tymes doesnt't mean thats what life is its like.. Never give up keep goin strong you only got your dreams because you kept holding on.
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (09:28 PM)
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  candylickerlov...
09/05/08 (12:18 PM) 
wow.. i like this alot.. i could relate to this.. good write miss.

  mai
08/23/08 (12:02 AM) 
aww how cute was that

  baby wiggles
08/21/08 (01:54 AM) 
wow this is watz up wit it i feel you on this one that is how i was in the begining of the poem then i changed good write well written keep ya pen movin ten starz

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