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"Life through my eyes"
  by MindFrame


In my mind
If life could stop on a dime
As in freeze frames and I hit rewind
So, i can go back to the times that times change
Revealing the big pictures
To re-arrange
As tho I was using a touch computer screen
But bare with me for this may sound insane
And I may stray from the subject
But this is what makes me sane
See.....
This is that lyical content
That sustained, and maintained, contained inside my brain
But, let me now get back to the things of change
Like change the situation and conflict between me and a childhood friend
That was caused by....
False lies and a infatuation with her......
Told to him
Ending in a friendship with me
Not understanding how pussy can make a man blind to see
The truth in the mist of her lies
But I tried.....
To explain the lies in what she sayin
Tryna convince him that she wasn't shyt
That we spoke one word
"Hi"...that's it
But he didn't believe it
So, he started a fight....
And I ended it......

To be continued..........!!!!
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (10:50 PM)
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  Tiff Wonder
09/14/08 (01:54 PM) 
you put a lot of emotion into this and I could tell. I really like how you opened this up comparing life with a dime and then referencing to times that have "changed". not sure if I added meaning to that myself but I liked it. lol 10

  azgoodazitgets
09/10/08 (03:05 PM) 
I'll have a front row seat to the cotinuence for sure. But so far so good. You've peaked my intrest and that's always a good thing. Keep it up. I know you're a great writter I can't wait to see what's next.

  sexy_NayNay
09/05/08 (06:59 PM) 
wow can't wait to hear the rest. so far so good.

  Vocab Vixen ak...
09/05/08 (06:18 PM) 
Damn.. Nice write.. good flow... to be continued eh?.. deffently cant wait for the continuance...

  shaybaby69
09/04/08 (11:47 PM) 
Welcome to Gs just showing some love to new writes on gs this was pretty good i was lost a few places but then picked back up i cant wait to see you progress on here much love

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