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"....~- LIFE WITH OUT U HERE WITH ME -~...."
  by lavish


REMEMBERING ALL THE
MEMORIES WE ONCE HAD

YOU SHOWED ME
A DIFFRENT WORLD
IN WITCH GOD DIDNT
LET US HAVE

YA SHOWED ME
A DIFFRENT SIDE OF ME
THE REAL ME
THAT I THOUGHT I COULD
NEVA BE

REMEMBERING THE WORDS
YA ONCE SAID TO ME

AND THE WORDS
U REALLY DIDNT MEAN

ITS JUST TO BAD
WE CANT GO BACK TO
THAT ONE PARTICULAR SCENE

I WALK THE SAME STREETS
WE ONCE TOOK
WITH THE SAME PERSONALITY

THE PERSONALITY U
TOUGHT ME TO BE
THE ONE THAT MADE U SO
HAPPY

BUT IVE
CHANGED A LITTLE BIT
YA SEE EVER SINCE YA LEFT
MY MINDS GONE CRAZY
I GOT THESE FEELINGS HIDDIN
ALL UP IN ME

IT ANT THE SAME
WALKING ALONG SOME WERE
WITH OUT U BESIDE ME

I WAS IN LOVE WITH YOU
U MADE ME FEEL SO FREE
I WAS HOPEN TO NEVA SEE
U LEAVE
CUZ I WASENT PLANIN
ON DOING THIS
THING CALLED LIFE WITH OUT
YOU HERE WITH ME







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Date Submitted: May 23, 2008 (06:11 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/23/08 (09:03 PM)
Author: YOUNG STACKZ
Poem Title: the life that we had

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comment icon  COMMENTS (52)
  LadiiTavia
08/21/08 (01:53 AM) 
awww im feelin it 10 stars

  beautifulsoul
08/12/08 (03:05 PM) 
awwww i been there so true n im feeling the flow also 10 starz

  Young Deeq
08/12/08 (12:57 PM) 
This was depp and beautiful, bbut if you wanna become a better poetic, my opinion is that you work on your rhyming and metaphors. but 10 stars no doubt about it

  Jhoney
06/26/08 (02:24 PM) 
wow i deff can dig this ma ... i feel u on it good write

  REALKISSES
06/25/08 (04:37 PM) 
bravo ma this was very good def love the concept`10 stars

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