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"Life Without You"
  by The Mad Poet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Your Not....... by Syndel


Revitalization....
Recognizing pain as my new
civilization
Misery unemployed but
heartache is never without
an occupation
It's tough being the
bad guy
Broken wings unable to fly
Where does the heart rest
when the joy dies
Somewhere between strange & the unknown
How can you convince a victim
of your destruction
that you've grown
I guess it's true every rose
has its thorn
Hell knows no fury like
a woman scorned.........

(Missing You)

Your kiss is like a
cool mist laced with a
summer breeze
If I could turn back
the hands of time
I would've dotted the "I's"
&
crossed the "T's"
Sorry don't begin to explain
my actions
But keep in mind I
built the foundation
So I can repair it
Now that it's cracking
Put away your suitcases
No need for packing
I'm stacking the broken
bricks in a neat stack
Determine to build
them back with attention
to detail
I will be the first
to admit I failed
The freshness on our
love quickly turned stale
I guess I'm a hopeless romantic
Even my pen is starting
to panic
I hope God give me
a clue what to do.....

(I'm lost without you)

I Never Wanna Live Without You - Mary J. Blige

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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2009 (12:08 PM)
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  Jamillah
10/15/09 (06:49 AM) 
aww.. nothin like someone recognizing he(or she) done messed up.. unfortunately sometimes its just not (good) enough, tho.. nice wordplays.

  BSavvy
10/08/09 (12:14 PM) 
This was just too sweet... Nice to see a man be able to just be vulnerable and express his true feelings.... Understanding what went wrong and how you can now fix it.... "Lost without you" <--- Not a good feeling I know... Nice pen

  Juicy1on1
10/08/09 (04:27 AM) 
Although full of many painful emotions this was simply beautiful and agreeing with blessed one sometimes we do need to hear your pain it lets us know that behind that hard exterior their is a heart that feels pain too.

  BlessedOne
10/07/09 (08:46 PM) 
Sometimes we as women need to hear a man pour out his heart and be transparent with his feelings. Nicely done.

  Syndel
10/07/09 (12:25 PM) 
MUSHY PLAIN OLD MUSHY ......nah this is nice I digress back to the drawing board

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