Work by day Hustle by night Some say I live a destructional life Reckless Miss Desperado Category 7 Tornado ........ Didn't think as a child I would be subjected to the world's cruel nature Promises broken Broken Promises without recognition Robbed sense of realities flipping through channels Swimming afloat with no hope at times> I think maybe dreams were "just my imagination once again running away from ME" Not a group song but just ME Sinking in quick sand without a branch or limb to help pull me out I shout " O Lord how have I forsaken thee" No answer Because I hear the tune of my, on beat Can't sleep Thinking of how my seeds are going to eat Walk a foot in my shoes You'll return the next day saying, these motherfucka's hurt my feet Im getting tired of living this meaningless way of life No way to turn So I feel stuck, A fruit that's dieing in the sun No where to run So Tired that I Retired from trying to make sense of it all Should I? Will I fall? Hope is a hallmark card, with x o x o's and I'll never forget to call But we do Life's a bitch So I pray that I make it through... the rough times
Doughboy:
If for every rough time I can get paid a dime then it wouldn't be so much pain and hurt in my rhyems See I've defined living a life of crime just to shine.....
Poetic Scriptures through rough times for just me and my nigga's More immune to death than life so we pull triggers Chasing dreams of havin big figures But lifes a bitch, so the poor get poor and the rich get richer In the mist of it all the youth misses the bigger picture.....
Religion will uplift you Them shells burn when they hit you! You couldn't walk a mile in my shoes Cause Life might trip you The Lord might skip you The Devil might flip you Your Destination is an issue Life is like taking a shit, without tissue Now you stuck, and that BITCH CALLED LIFE just Dissed you Mentally unstable minds go flat-line with Government issued pistols I bet you wish the rough times fuckin missed you....
mm... couldnt walk a mile in my shoe cause life'll trip you... i don't think any of us can stand in anothers shoes frankly... no matter how greener lookin the grass.... always brown spots somewhere.. pain is personal. "Nicely" done, you two... I'm sure youre keepin the heads up tho... else I wouldn't be reading this now...
Yo, I always feel you ma.... thats why we clicked so fast in the first place..... We walk that same walk but different swag's!! Life's definitely a Bitch though.... but long as you around and Im in your corner we'll get through it! Much luv, you know what it is!!!!!
both of you came hard on this collabo...i can't even quote anything that i like because i was feelin all of it...nice write. keep the ink flowin 10 starz
wow u two really went there on this one pretty u already know u come wit tha gritty all day and dough boy the way u opened up that stanza had me like WorD!! U both got my respect off this one excelent write
This is real talk....Im feelin this. Yall did yall thang with this, on the real. I really this line right here "Walk a foot in my shoes
You'll return the next day saying,
these motherfucka's hurt my feet"
Al least its not too clinche'...I REALLY love this write and that line especially but yall did yall thang. Ten starz and a fave.
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