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"*Light*"
  by *@ngelic~Wordz*


As the moon casts it’s light
upon the blue ocean,
I absorb the beauty of the moment.
I am like this ocean,
it turns dark when night comes,
but the moon keeps shining
I need others light to keep me bright,
but I don’t fully understand who’s light
it is that I receive.
The moon doesn’t have it’s own light,
it receives it from the sun.
So when I say I am like the ocean,
I mean I am all alone
with no light of my own.
The sun gives his light to the moon,
but the moon doesn’t give his to the ocean,
the ocean takes it.





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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (01:17 AM)
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  Demon of Darkn...
09/13/08 (09:04 AM) 
HOW DID I MISS DIS , DANG DIS IS JUS SO REAL.. DANG THE WAY YOU FLOW IS SUMMIT ELSE.. YOU ALWAYS DRAW ME IN WIT YOUR STRONG VERBAGE STRONG DEPTH.. MASSIVE UPS AS EVER DK

  piss a mofo of...
09/05/08 (11:58 AM) 
this Poem is filled with emotions from just being, then depending, and finally unsure...deep thoughts in these few words...

  B. Rose
09/05/08 (03:29 AM) 
The wrids used in this piece made the scribe magnificient... the imagery was great nice job...

  jerl
09/04/08 (06:25 PM) 
Very well spoken and devilishly deceptive as well. You are correct, no light of it's own but, offers beauty untold. Very good piece. You're new gere, I can tell, you read two of my poems without first asking me to even read yours. Usually they ask you, tell you to read rheirs and makes that same old, tired line, I'll return the luv. This was a breath of fresh air, welcome aboard! 10 stars.

  unique1luv
09/04/08 (05:27 PM) 
Very beautiful rhymes ma.Muy hermosa indeed.I can mos def relate to this one. Like the simliles and metaphors used here.Very creative

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