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"Like A Star"
  by BlakkStarr


Since I first laid eyes on you
I knew it was real
just thinking bout what to say
had gears turning like wheels
you electrified my life
like tounge kissing an eel
this right here
is what i would call ideal
unreal, surreal,
you and me got classic appeal
cuz of past experiences
my hearts usually on conceal
but i let my guard down
now its yours to steal
i feel like your that one
that can finally let me heal
have that good love
like Bill and Camille
every moment that im with you
is like a highlight reel
just talking all night
aint gotta club you like seals
me and you stay tough
like alloy steel
i stick to my words
and never punk out like Micheal Steel
hands around you
Armstrong like Neil
just hoping you never leave me
like Lucille

i see you from afar
afar afar
cuz you shine like a star
a star a star
and i know just who you are
you are you are
girl your my shining star
my star my star

while other girls preyed on me
left me ice cold
everytime i talk to you
i only feel like gold
gave up on love
but low and behold
you broke the mold
and now its like a story untold
once upon a time
not long ago
the summers were blazing
and the winters were cold
you not another Jane Doe
im not your average Joe
they wanna see real love
lets give em a show
Mya is cool
but your love is like whoa
thats why its so impossible
to let you go
i really hope that you in it
for the long road
i know you said you was
now im falling like snow
my heart needs patchwork
i hope you know how to sew
i had enough of moving fast
lets try taking it slow
our auras giving off
a bright red glow
they dont wanna see us happy
and.....so?

i see you from afar
afar afar
cuz you shine like a star
a star a star
and i know just who you are
you are you are
girl your my shining star
my star my star

I knew from day one
that you wanted this
you think im handsome
i love your sexyness
your my fanstasy chick
its heavenly bliss
loving everythiing you do
and your heavenly kiss
no worries from me
Im not like Chris
my hands only wanna caress
from your back to your hips
to the point you remenise
and beg me for this
loving i give
the kind you thought would never exist
keep your heart in sky
dont worry bout whats below
we can make it yo
its as easy as the wind blows
i mean from here
its only one way for us to go
from here i can only see us
rising like dough
other want a large mansion
we in our own chateau
and ill always be your hero
like G.I. Joe
its T & A for life
and i aint talking tits and ass
if they have to ask
then they'll never really know

i see you from afar
afar afar
cuz you shine like a star
a star a star
and i know just who you are
you are you are
girl your my shining star
my star my star
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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2009 (07:28 PM)
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  Traxler
07/05/09 (12:53 AM) 
dammn this would be a good ass song. I lovee the rhyme and emotion is beautiful. I can really see this on a beat though haha

  msz.unique
06/20/09 (12:11 PM) 
ohh dis is beautiful! I love tha rhyme scheme along with tha melodic lyrics..very real indeed. keep writing boo 10 starz.

  ~Unpredictable...
06/19/09 (03:50 AM) 
*looks down*...WHO DIS WOMAN HARPO?????!!!!

  ~Unpredictable...
06/19/09 (03:49 AM) 
awwwwwwwww, this was very nice....LILDADDY!!!!

  Angie Bee
06/19/09 (12:59 AM) 
Wow baby i love it and you take my breath away no one has ever done anything like that for me and this song i love it too i feel the same way i really want to make us work cause you make me so happy.... hurry up and record it lol xoxo angie

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