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"Like Charlie Brown"
  by Guey2



Peanuts - Charlie Brown


Got bags under my eyes i been trying to sleep
Chicken soup on my lap i been trying to eat
Its Christmas and the charlie brown special
is something i been dying to see.

Lucy, Linus, Snoopy, and Pig Pin
They only two things to ever capture how i feel
were Charlie browns facial expressions and my ink pen.

Brings back memories, it brings back memories
me, my mom, and my dad used to watch it all together
Back when i thought things wouldn't change ever
back when i thought things couldn't get better.

Chuck Brown didn't change ever
He been like Nine years old, forever.

The cold air chills my body glad i got my blanket
Five cents on the dresser im totally bankless
Need to take some piano lessons,
my thoughts drift towards strangeness.

I remember when he first asked his crush out
i was the same age when i did so, we did it the same way
wit much doubt.
Guess im feeling like Chuck Brown.

Played football i definitely wasn't the kicker
Trying to hard made me land wit the force of a Rictor
What are the adults saying to me? Repeat that again Mister.

This show made me proud
The peanut gang lived life the same way i did wit much doubt
Guess im feeling like Chuck Brown.

Relaxing in my room wrapped in a youths rapture
back when adolescence was to me a simple form of nomenclature
Even though i still needed the answer

This show was all i needed to calm down
Even when i take my frustration and scream out loud.
Wow
.
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.
.
Guess im feeling like Charlie Brown.






Good Grief




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Date Submitted: Aug 24, 2008 (10:33 PM)
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  The Hood Poet
09/09/08 (10:46 AM) 
instant fav

  JUST CRIS
09/03/08 (07:21 PM) 
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u clowned on diz 4real man smart move 10strz all da way

  Kiiah
08/26/08 (01:51 AM) 
Clever write...I didnt grow up on Charlie Brown...I watched sum shows but I wasnt a fan...but this piece rite here is hot... I liked the imagery u used in it.... 10 starz... keep the pen flowin,,,,

  danceluv08
08/26/08 (01:39 AM) 
speechless! A GENIUS! WEN COMES DOWN TO PUTTIN DAT PEN N PAPER..WOW VERY CREATIVE AND WOW..ten a fav

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
08/26/08 (12:22 AM) 
Awww....Now HOW you gon come up with dat?!?! l0l This is TOO good!!! Dang man, I bet you were really living it up like Chuck, werent u?? Hey matter fact...you do kinda have his vibe. l0l Ten starz and a fave...you did it again.

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