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"Like Them"
  by leezymleezy


As if your presence was all I needed to get by
I waited for you as darkness invited the sunrise
And the moon came back
Again

What does it take to be like society
As they walk about

Hands clasped
And
Fingers intertwined

Supposedly they found something
That I find impossible to find

I wish you'd simply take a walk with me
Just to view a peek of where I'm from
And maybe real life will finally begin
If my time shall come
To be
Like them
Killing me softly (Instrumental) - Fugees
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2008 (10:39 PM)
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  jadakiss
12/23/08 (12:37 AM) 
i feel where dis is comin from ...but dat ends in heart break 4 me..nice write n love da music >>>>singer<<<< 10 starz

  Lil Lexis
12/02/08 (09:12 PM) 
I like this because its different.. the opposite of what I usually see.. Someone wanting to become a part of society instead of being the different individual one.. unless you were being sarcastic then i missed it!

  !~~QUAY>>>
12/01/08 (09:31 PM) 
wow i really like this one..and the instrumental behind it was genius

  Dreshawn
11/29/08 (11:29 AM) 
If my time shall come, To be, Like Them...Classic! I like poems that tell about people who dont wanna imitate society...That wanna be individuals and not in a mass...POWER...LOL. I know but I loved every stanza of this poem...Thanks for sharing. Uniquely Insane

  Chocolate City
11/26/08 (10:44 PM) 
i waited for u as darkness invited the sunrise.. im feeling them words.. im really feelin this one.. i had to smile wt the end.. bcuz u killed it.. and the way u put it together.. keep doin ya thang bro

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