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"like U"
A Quite and Miss Self Sufficient Collaboration


  Quite:

A lady like u,brings peace 2 my eyes.
U r the foundation,that touch my spiritual side.
Chicago must b bless,with ur dazzing sweet beauty.
Y do u think,ur beyond a hot cutie.
Baby ur spirit,is intoxicating like wine.
I crave the affection,only u can provide.
So take my advice and enjoy the surprise.
In other words baby,ur radiance won't decline.
Because ur inner beauty,will flourish through time.
A princess like u,is hard 2 deny.
Maybe it's because,ur the essence of fine.

  Miss Self Sufficient:

**clears throat**

I must say you have me stuck I'm at a lost for words

is Chicago blessed?. i will never know
But if you guide me to you i will follow

I have been living a fucked up life
My heart been cut up with a knife.
U on the other hand, was sent to me
How far are you? Why can't i see

Your words so touchy, got me melting over here
I hope your love is one i won't fear

Ur such a gentleman
you express yourself well
At the top of the Sears Towers
Your name i will yell

  Quite:

Damn baby boo,I like ur style.
Making me feel special,when I don't know y.
Ur such a sweet lady,like home made apple pie.
Just picturing ur pressence,makes me feel more alive.
By reading ur material,I know I'll survive.
U made some mistakes,but so have I.
4get all our eras,u sweet sexy dime.
Baby I promise,2 be ur Bonnie and Clyde.
The only thing I need,is god greatest shine.
Excuse me Miss Chicago,but u inspired this ryhme.

  Miss Self Sufficient:

Aight daddy lets put it this way
You got me think'n of you every day

What is it that i see, i hope to one day know
But till then theses rythmes i will hold

You are so special you bring a smile to my face
I must say that this is some what of a love case

You so sweet...where you been all this time
Aww you had me blushing when you called me "sexy dime"

Baby you promise to be our Bonnie and Clyde
I'm ready, lets hit the road, for a joyride

You ride for me and i will ride for you, despite the miles
All the way from Chi-town, my heart for you smiles
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (11:29 AM)
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  BxGrL
11/21/08 (06:43 PM) 
aww that was a nice write..... you complimented each other so well. Nicely done.

  touchdapearl2
11/17/08 (12:35 PM) 
This was a warm adoring peace...and i loved her vulnerability and the way you asured her she can give her all to you and your ready 2 recieve it,fiya write

  PHILLY PRINCEZ...
11/17/08 (11:48 AM) 
You two did ya damn thing 10 stars and it's going on my fav.

  Miss Self Suff...
11/17/08 (11:46 AM) 
we did our thning..i love it! now don't hesitate to get back to me once again for a collabo.. 10*stars

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