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"Lil Lexis...(Not A Diss...Take It How You Wanna)....-FREE WRITE-"
  by COMPLEX MENTALITY
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Disrespected by Lil Lexis


Lil Lexis......you sent me this link in a message...couldn't have tha heart to tell me come check it...Tryna swim in the ocean...still on the ship....where tha deck is. You feel disrespected...don't know what respect is...Insulted your intelligence?..Son lemme correct this (.......)--thats dots, try to connect this...I'm 20 your 16....Hold up...AND REFLECT THIS....(Oh, its suspected)...While you at it...turn ya aim...cuz its mis-directed....Abused and neglected.....Put it back together....tragically disconnected....Off the radar...not detected...An image reflected....couldn't stay up...used Viagra....still cant erect it. Don't come at me subliminally..wanna kno when I'm being injected....And you? Just dejected...Wanting affirmation...but I had to reject it. Musta felt hurt, wrote a poem....Me? unaffected....At least have sex with a condom.....you came unprotected...that means no protection....I would sort it out...but with you..there's no section. My smart ass comment?....Yo, re-look upon it...cuz you took shit to tha heart...way outta context...I'm not taking back my content. I mean what I say...so I say what I mean....You with that "hear-say"....but I say what is seen. I'ma set this aside.....which means allocated....And please re-locate this....and when you do....just take this....Cuz ya words like spilled milk...and dat shit evaporated...



Author's note: Ma...see, you coulda came wisely...told me how you felt....But I guess you play with the cards that your dealt...Don't post ish on GS about me outta frustration...When you could have a one on one conversation...Cuz ya poem....look like an act of desperation....Like Goobs say...aim for higher expectations....tryna break tha law...no papers...immigration...You know what's the sincerest form of flattery?..Imitation...No love, just infatuation....Shoulda used ya head....now you stuck in this situation.....SMH
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (05:46 PM)
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  D.O.X.
08/15/08 (06:39 PM) 
shit u went off....i'm thinkin about if i should even read his shit...lol

  Hank
07/21/08 (01:01 PM) 
Good grief! It had to come to this didn't it? Now we got beef on goddamn poerty site!!! Fiya write C.M. LOVED it!!! But please do not waist your words and energy on CHILD!! This broad ain't even old enough to vote yet and you slammed her like thatLOL!!! Just smile and keep the pen moving! 10* Keep doin' you!!!

  bookum
07/20/08 (04:59 PM) 
ok you did your thing on this..you kept it real...and as always your wordplay was official...nice write. 10

  MiXmAsTaMaX
07/20/08 (02:03 PM) 
whoa...

  *SaVaGe*
07/19/08 (09:29 PM) 
Holy shit... this is the best poem ive seen on gs..hands the fuck down...not that its a diss or anything but this is just fuckin rawr..omg...fav and ten starz!!1..SaVaGe

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