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"Liquid Dreamz {.nirvana.touched.} Remixed Collabo"
A J@yBoogz and *JazISweet* Collaboration


  J@yBoogz••.•'¯'•. ..> {The Ghetto Zombie}:

*Welcome back home my collab QUEEN*!

Twilight quietly transcendent
in diaphanous fingertip Poetry flowing
omniscient eternally star dust infused...entwined

.We.

Remain in the spaces
between breaths of hushed devotions
Fluttering on soft breezes
as black velvet ribbons
Trailing from naked white birch trees
symphonic in movement
Elegant

.You.

.I.

Fly to infinity
from the edge of a sleeping midnight
Timeless in the grace of awakening heartbeats
entwined seamless

.Flawless.

.Us.

  *JazISweet*:

Sacrosanct am I
to the devotion of our preserved harmony.
Words completely and preciously
contiguous through our bond

Dedicated am I
to the passionate scriptures in which we unravel
Unreservedly out of our minds derived
from emotions do they flutter

.You.

.and.

.I.

A covenant in which solely do we
alone create our thoughts together as one

.You.

The very essence
of my ability to capture such poetry

.I.

Aroused by the sweet aroma
solely I can smell in your language

.Us.

Beauty
with the avoidance of flaw...

  J@yBoogz••.•'¯'•. ..> {The Ghetto Zombie}:

ThugLuv Poetry Y'all.
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Date Submitted: Oct 05, 2008 (01:56 PM)
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  XPERIENCE
11/13/08 (04:26 AM) 
werd wiz! how the hell i miss this one!!! damn yall got me all like awwwww... i miss the old gs days yall..and yall just reminded me of that... the good ole days...thsi was refreshing... loved the verbiage in this one..." Twilight quietly transcendent in diaphanous fingertip Poetry flowing omniscient eternally star dust infused...entwined " damn Jay...and "Sacrosanct am I to the devotion of our preserved harmony. Words completely and preciously contiguous through our bond " Jaz that was beautifu...
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  nywizdom
11/03/08 (05:51 PM) 
OH shiznit...the dream duo is back! Pen and ink reunited. Nice piece. Flow was smooth like water a drip of water rolling down a baby's back. matched each other well. nice one people!

  mindigoblue
10/22/08 (07:39 PM) 
This is wondrously beautiful in it's gentle and flawless delivery. The melding of the two is virtually seamless and creates a continuously flowing stream of delight. Superb...Sir Poet and poetess

  Kaine
10/12/08 (11:06 PM) 
This collabo is off the hook! the music just echo the sentiment is these words! Jay & Jay, I see that one is not enough! Blaze!!

  Tpoet
10/12/08 (02:30 PM) 
very beatuful collab

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