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"Listen 2 My Words"
  by Quite


Listen 2 my words,while I express my pain.
July twenty ninth,was the day I became.
Because 6 years later,my heart became plagued.
Why do you think,I walk with much shame.
Maybe it's because,my father said somethings.
And till this day,I'm emotionally chained.
I remember his words,like the 10 commandments.
Thomas you're an accident,so why did we have you.
19 years later,I'm his number 1 dude.
And all I really want,is happiness 4 this fool.
In other words brothers,be a better man.
Because with out love,how can we still stand.
Listen 2 my words,while I express my shame.
For now and forever,my blood type is pain.
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Date Submitted: Jun 14, 2008 (12:40 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/22/08 (06:11 AM)
Author: BxGrL
Poem Title: Listen 2 my words 2

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comment icon  COMMENTS (86)
  Chinazy
08/25/09 (01:13 PM) 
WOWW TRU TLK

  SoaringButterf...
08/17/09 (03:00 PM) 
Wow, love. It took strength to put this message out to other brothers. I admire you for this piece and the realness that came with it. Thanks for being the poet you are.

  monica
07/24/09 (11:30 PM) 
WOW THIS WAS DEEP I LOVE IT MA FAVORTIE PART WAS MA BLOOD IS PAIN THAT WAS A HOT LINE I MIGHT STEAL IT LOL TEN FOR YOU

  lady jada
07/23/09 (12:25 AM) 
i cant say i know how you feel but i felt the emotion floatin off the page and i know alot of men that claim things that that dont effect them and im glad to see you can put it out there in an inspirational way 10 stars

  geel
07/21/09 (10:45 PM) 
remember in your fathers eyes you may be considered and accident but in Gods eyes this was all planed to bring u forth for just a time as this...Ultimately your biological father is only your care-taker while his on this earth to partake in bringing u forth but your true father is GOD himself the creater of heaven and earth and remember that there is no greater love and exceptance than from HIM

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