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"Listen 2 My Words"
  by Quite


Listen 2 my words,while I express my pain.
July twenty ninth,was the day I became.
Because 6 years later,my heart became plagued.
Why do you think,I walk with much shame.
Maybe it's because,my father said somethings.
And till this day,I'm emotionally chained.
I remember his words,like the 10 commandments.
Thomas you're an accident,so why did we have you.
19 years later,I'm his number 1 dude.
And all I really want,is happiness 4 this fool.
In other words brothers,be a better man.
Because with out love,how can we still stand.
Listen 2 my words,while I express my shame.
For now and forever,my blood type is pain.
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Date Submitted: Jun 14, 2008 (12:40 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/22/08 (06:11 AM)
Author: BxGrL
Poem Title: Listen 2 my words 2

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  Raw Sensuality...
12/25/08 (09:30 PM) 
Damn...this is deep as hell... my 11 year old daughter had her father deny he was her Dad last month... all because he didn't wanna pay child support... now ... a DNA test later... he's gotta pay for the test AND the child support...and her blood type is pain too... PREACH AND TEACH... you are gifted indeed... write on

  Poetiss
12/07/08 (07:38 PM) 
Very strong and to he point.....I like this...

  Ambeee
12/03/08 (08:44 AM) 
wow i know how you feel my dad didnt have a dad in his life and you would think "hey i know how it feels not to have a father in my life so i want different for my kid" nope not him he still not here but ive learned to keep my head up and you should do the same this is a wonderful poem :-)

  revolt
12/02/08 (11:25 AM) 
ok shot and very powerfull

  phatty whatty
11/28/08 (10:47 PM) 
This is nice.....ur a smooth writer and u shouldn't feel ashamed ur dad should....but beautifuly written...i give u 10 stars

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