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"Listen"
  by MindFrame


Just listen
As I take you into the mind of a adolescent
Datz asking questions and second guessin' the ones thats tryna teach the lesson
An at their own discretion they don't listen
Until they're placed in that situation
Facin' the consequences of the mistakes their makin'
Then sittin' and thinkin'.....
Like damn if I only listened,
To all the long discussions
But sure enough in my mind its the sounds of a repetition
So steady missin' the moral lesson of the discussion
Till my eyes open and my mind awaken
And one starts to listen.......
To realize I've grown out of the mind of a adolescent
Knowin' I can do better, then those who are doing nothin'
Like go to school, start a profession'....
But thats a different lesson
So I count my blessin's
As I listen
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Date Submitted: Aug 30, 2008 (05:50 PM)
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  Care-Bear
09/18/08 (07:10 PM) 
i kinda wish i had listened in certain situations...taking heed to a lot of things can keep us out of a lot of the stuff we put ourselves in. loved the way you wrote this....and it was a well done piece....

  stricklyfromth...
09/04/08 (10:47 PM) 
Nicely said sir. When we learn to listen and learn from our mistakes we become to evolve as adults

  WIZ
09/02/08 (07:59 PM) 
from beginning to end that's cookin with some hot ass flow too! Like your rites, they draw me in!! ROCK-ON!!!!

  G.G
08/30/08 (06:19 PM) 
I think its s0 true dat da m0re u jus listen da m0re u get instead 0f 0pening ya m0uth s0 much. wise w0rds y0u wr0te. write 0n.

  unique1luv
08/30/08 (06:05 PM) 
The wise will yell u 2 listen...Don't jus hear what's bein sain and u mos def lyricilized that into this write.So for that u have my uppmost respect and my ear=] lol Keep em comin

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