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"Little Black Widow"
  by Night Crawler


innocent i look ..

as i strike .. venom will kill

little black widow


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sometimes a lady can kill a part within you with just a few words
these words strike with the power of the venom from the black widow
leaving you heartbroken .. with alot of pain
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2009 (06:39 PM)
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  Wordsmith
09/15/09 (03:20 AM) 
Language is lethal...I wrote a poem about verbal abuse...It's called Victim of Love...

  ButterflyDream
07/10/09 (08:31 PM) 
very truthful,releasing a bit of that vunerability I see.loved the concept,mister.

  Remy82
07/07/09 (06:12 PM) 
This is so true. but you know it happens on both sides of the spectrum as well. great expression.

  MR. BYRD
07/04/09 (07:34 PM) 
You ain't never lying about that bruh...that's real talk, and a few words can hurt, but all depends on how you take those words....a strong mind is very key...great piece bruh

  Brian Ardoin
07/03/09 (02:54 AM) 
Truthful spoken man.. definitely got something out of this one.. sometimes one or very few words can lead to one's downfall. Excellent haiku man keep em coming

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