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"Little Brother (Dedicated To BlakkStarr)"
  by BLAKK ROSE


My kid brother is a big brother/
Ckuz he's Janipoo & Mrzsmooch's big brother/
Also Akey brother and My Bestfriend/
Who's also my mentor now let the dedicatin commence/

It was 1987 march 9 in the Chi/
Born was Tracy Lamar Bush II but he wasnt shy/
About expressin his emotions... thats type of guy/
He always been.. how do I know ckuz I/
I have always been apart of his lyfe/
Since he was bron im his older bro we ckant be torn/
Apart, beckuz Ive learned so much from him from the start/
How to be a bigger brother he helped me master that art/
See without him I wouldnt knoe what to do/
When my sisters came along, ckuz I wouldnt have been thru/
the learning that I went thru... with this dude/
Shyt let me keep it moving... let me explain what been thru/

Arguments & Fights with each other and others/
But the result is we ended up having more love for each other/
but he kinda like a big brother... let me tell you how/
Ckuz of somebody get in my grill... he made it clear and loud/
Nobody messes with me unless they want two the jaw/
Has my bakk right or wrong/
And he always keeps it one hundred with me no matter what/
So when It comes to my poetry... he lest me know whats up/
And we been a duo ever since we was old enough/
To compose our lyrics, now its hard to gget rid of us/

He is someone, I couldnt never see myself without/
We liks Scooby and Shaggy... except we dont smoke out/
I love my bro to death everybody who seen together know that/
And even in his funny way of showing it he loves me bakk/
So this is a dedication to someone like anyother/
BlakkStarr AKA My big kid brother

I love you dawg.... I By MySelf son HOOO!!!!!!


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Date Submitted: Oct 08, 2007 (04:21 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/08/07 (01:37 PM)
Author: BlakkStarr
Poem Title: BIG BROTHA

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  **MissKiKi**
01/20/08 (03:01 PM) 
aww this was a bautiful dedication for ur brother.. I know he loved it and it was definately known to the reader the love u have for him. Its a beautiful thing Blakk.. loved it..

  BLACK STORM
10/10/07 (08:34 PM) 
AWWWWWWWWWW I SHED A TEAR.........THIS IS REAL.......MOS DEF...IM LOVIN IT.......I HAVE A CLOSE BOND WI MY BROTHERS TOO...I HAVE NO CHOICE....IM DA ONLY GURL..LOL

  Afroditee
10/09/07 (09:21 PM) 
**wipes a tear*****sniffle**blows nose***there is nothing more wonderful than family, and i love the fact that you can so openly show your emotions and the way that he helped you to grow...sigh...

  deSi
10/08/07 (09:19 PM) 
"my KiD broTha iS a biG broTha..." awWwZzz diS waS heLLa sweeT yo...muCh LuV & reSpeCt 2 u 4 diS 1..deSi

  Leta Lea
10/08/07 (01:40 PM) 
Awww now that was the most beautifully, touching, loving dedication I have ever read. This was just to adorable for words. It flowed well and Im love'n the strong bond you too have as brothers. Much luv to the both of you. This was a hot write.

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