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"Living without you!"
  by Tecey


I keep looking in all the places, where you are supposed to be. But i never seem to find you and your all i long to see. I just can't seem to understand, what it was that changed your mind. All this time i thought i knew you, when really, i was blind. But know that i dont hate hate you, and i know i never will. Because i cared about you then and i care about you still. Even though you hurt me, i cant seem to let you go. But i will go on without you, and i want to make sure you know. It will take some time to mend, The damage that you've done. But broken hearts do heal , thats where strength comes from. For now, the tears may be falling, and my thoughts keep circling to you. But soon, things will get better, if you have hope then they always do.
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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2007 (06:14 PM)
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  jerl
06/30/07 (01:36 AM) 
That is a very good poem. It would have been excellent if you had only written it in plain English. I defend your right to write in your own style, but I had to re-read it in several spots and that takes away from the presentation. Excellent rhyme, good structure.

  deSi
06/29/07 (06:22 PM) 
i reaLLy Lik3d diS 1 rite here...i totaLLy underStanD where u r cuMn 4rm...i waS n a siMiLar situati0n, but it juZ s0 haPpNd dat i waS da 1 wh0 broKe h3r heaRt...but y0 diS waS hot...sTay uP

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