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"Lonely boys...and girls"
  by Eternal Flow
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Lonely Girls by King of Hearts


Lonely boys and girls...

Not only girls get lonely boys get lonely too..
even thugs...
even drug dealers and pimps....
I’m wrong about the pimps though...

Lonely girls..
lonely girls sing songs....
nights seem to go long....
She was a member of the series of little girls that dreamed too big...
Rape was her bid....
Molestation made her sick....
see she was never plump nor thick...
she never grew breast....
because her chest
could not illuminate off the crevice of her dress...
Growth spurt on her mind...
thinking grow, grow, grow
ass...
Please...
These mens need these and these...
these....
Lonely girls sing...
“this to shall pass”
she will never resemble an hour glass...
Hour glass...
past the sands of time...
She was a pencil instead...
and her friend a subordinate was a fire truck...
she was teased for being to big on her knees...
sucked to find shelter...
fucked to be close...
Held on to the man
she loved...
Loved him with no glove...
because they say....
“ Man, it feels better that way”

Lonely boys...become lonely men..
Thugs...
Pimps...
live in sin..
even the preachers
become teachers....
in the molestation ring...
Like a cock fight....
with no fight left...
So it was just to cocks...
and one dike left....

Lonely men molest children...
No....
Sick men molest children...
Lonely girls molest themselves...
and call it masturbation...

Here’s the line that will make you think: sick...
She masturbated off
her abusers touch...
off his facial futures and his taste...
She touched herself....
unwilling to let the memory go...

Little girls and boys...
aren’t innocent anymore...
Boys become cowards...
or boys become soldiers...
girls stay victims...
or live normal lives...

Grow up only to get beat...
Stabbed, choked, and raped...

Grow up only to join gangs,
and kill,
use drugs,
and steal...

Grow up only to loose god,
Who will help my babies?
I’m just 16 with three by my
fathers son,
Memories play us like we play ourselves....

We are all lonely girls and boys...
Think of everyone you know...
Some of you have plentiful lives...
Some of you want more than you can ever receive...
Some of you dream big and fall hard...
Not all are lonely..
Just remember...
Loneliness doesn't cause aids...
Loneliness doesn't drive you...
You drive it...
you defined it...
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Date Submitted: Nov 04, 2009 (03:37 PM)
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  Variator
11/06/09 (05:32 PM) 
this takes me to a real dark place. just to cocks with one dike left- that line was sik and then the line,...well hell my reply would be as long as your poem. holy geez i luv ur stuff

  LatrinaThePoet
11/04/09 (05:58 PM) 
i believe that one should be fulfilled with their self..

  floatingonthev...
11/04/09 (05:53 PM) 
wow, this blew me away, and while I wanna sit here and go on this huge rant of why this was so poignant and beautiful, I won't.. I just want to marinate in ur words that are still replaying in my mind.. amazing write.. forreal.

  Psychosis Aka ...
11/04/09 (05:37 PM) 
fLOW I love your work because you are not afraid to venture into the dark side of life! this piece shows your fiyah about this matter. I can dig this one very deep. I am looking to see a lighter side of you one day tho. Keep the ink going my sister !

  Pink Diamond10...
11/04/09 (04:03 PM) 
You blew my mind with this one... it was entertaing my humor at the same making me think about the sad reality of lonely girls and boys! Keep that ink flowin! Ima fav this one!

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